Give this one a chance! If you can overlook the grammatical and spelling errors, there's a fast paced, action packed storyline here and the character design is incredible! I fell in love with the characters by the end of the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!
I enjoy this writer. His stability of updating is very regular! I don’t have to wait days for the next chapters! This start to this book has made me enjoy reading again! Amazing!
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this book was rather unique when it comes to character design and world building I was rather surprised to see that the main character isn't looking at the present.
although the characters are not introduced in depth this story I think had a good world background.the pace of this work is amazing too.. .
I am surprised how good this is even when the MC can be a little creeper so time to time.
Alrighty, Before I start this amazing review I want to say I binged read this in like 5 days. Verrry Good book, one of the better ones on Webnovel to me anyway.Writing Quality - 4The writing is fairly good, there are spelling mistakes here and there. Though, I can understand people make mistakes here and there. The mistakes aren't huge and you can easily figure out what the author was trying to say. The chapters are a perfect length, from what I can see they are thought through very well.Your storytelling is quite unique for some reason I fucking love the way you write. For example, the first world, to me was the best. Stability of Updates - 5From what I can see, you have been uploading 1-2 chapters daily for around 3 months. I completely understand how hard it is to post daily, I tried at a time with my novel and was only able to post 1,500 words at the most each day. Though, it got very tiring after awhile.Story Development - 5I'm not trying to make out that your book is a godsend, but it's quite good and deserves 5 stars for story development. The first volume was well described and very easy to understand. For me, I was easily able to follow the story of a traveler and the Esper's world as a whole.The second volume kept up with Alex exploring the world and finding new companions. No time throughout volume two was I confused, I just wanted to keep reading.Finally, Volume three. A fucking world filled with superhumans, who wouldn't want to keep reading. One of the greatest things that I enjoy about this book is the way it's set up. Alex goes to a new world each volume, meaning the author is able to create new exciting adventures without getting tired of one single world. Character Design - 4.5The character Design in this book is quite good. Though me personally I dislike the way the fairy acts and how clueless and oblivious Alex is. Alex is starting to become less oblivious but he's still pretty clueless about his surroundings. World Background - 5As I stated countless times throughout the review thus far, Moving around to different worlds is amazing. I'm enjoying the author's different worlds too much. Each of the world's that Alex goes to is well described before the volume starts. You may be confused at first but once the story develops more you go "Oh!" and understand everything that is going on. Ending (Overall 4.6) Overall, the book is fucking amazing. The author did a very good job of creating a complex and unique storyline. I don't understand why your book as so little reviews and or views. Not enough people are reading this masterpiece. P.S Author we are all waiting for Alex to get fucking laid. When is that going to happen?
It's alredy half a year but still no update... Please this is better than the apex system. Can't you continues this one for awhile. Please update this book...... I beg you. ??
This LN may turn out to be a hidden gem. It all depends on how the story unfolds further. The MC is too ruthless and a deep mystery lurks around the mc. We'll know everything soon enough. The character design is good. But I'm actually more excited about the story.
The novel is a mesmerizing tapestry of mystery, personal growth, and exploration. With its compelling storytelling, well-rounded characters, and evocative settings, this book offers an immersive and thought-provoking reading experience that lingers long after the chapter. Highly recommended.
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