For the first time that day, Xhemin's eyes met Huzey's and their gaze held on for minutes. Xhemin's dark eyes dug into the eyes of the man before her and suddenly, her stares got drowned somewhere under his ocean deep blue eyes and deeper within.
'There! There it is! That voice it sounded a little clearer.' She thought as she looked around. She decided on the direction of the voice and walked. She didn't know if she would find anything or hear the voice again so there was no point in running.
"Sure"
"Yes, more or less."
Good novel, good faceslapping, good translation.Mubai is a nice guy, don't hate on him.Lin Lin is precious, I sure hope nothing bad happens to him...Mr Translator and Mr Editor are pretty good. ?Whoever they are... ?
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i didn't fully read this but i promise i will. I'm also a writer so I thing it's important to help each other. if you want to read my work here. "Dimensional travel: The Ageless Wanderer" it's really hard to get reviews but don't give up. all the best.
This work is a literary gem, captivating from the first page to the final word. The author's storytelling excellence is displayed in the richly detailed characters and complex plot. Each twist and turn held my attention, making it hard to set the book down. The prose is both elegant and accessible, painting vivid images that draw you into the author's world.
Really solid 5star fanfiction. As others have said your writing is very good, i like that we also get others perspective not only MCs, for me pace is good but i am afraid you will get burned out by your storytelling pace and please do not make this about harem or romance.
good good good good good good good good good good good good good
This has to be one of the best plots for a web novel and the high writing quality is simply fantastic incredible work done.
I am not used to write reviews on the stories I read but I will make an exception for this one , This story is great almost an hidden gem ! Their is a system but not the usual and cliche one , the characters and the main one are very uncommon I like this story too because of the unusual type of world, this is a grey-dark world where everything is clearly not all pink, I really want to read more to see the development of the characters and the evolution of the novel !