Artoriastheabyssen
MC still the same... And loves arguing with opponents in battle... is also complete trash who can't deal with returning enemy he already defeated... Thinks with his jiji too much Retarded weak MC thinks more about getting p**ssy than getting op and dominating the world with his system ...................................
Beautiful! Beautiful characters, Beautiful structurization of the game and Beautiful start! I'm waiting for more! And a prise to the admins XD
just dont drop this bro....................................................................................................................thats all
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bro I don't understand how this is not popular THIS IS A HIDDEN DIAMOND give this a try and you might like it holy man..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Yoo if you keep on writing this well, you can make some good money on here! Keep it up author! ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is actually outside what I usually read and what made me want to finish is the writer’s good grammar and descriptions. Good job writer, I look forward to reading more.
Nice read! Not too much if an info dump. Some mistakes here there, but very descriptive. Like how it fits the age of the main character. Looking forward for more.
Shameless
It's goodLike Really Really Really GoodIt's not a gem in the rough, it's a hidden gemI went in with no expectation, I came out with diamondsI went looking for copper, I found the purest of goldIt's great, read thisLike you should really read this
The premise that person gets into a video game is done already, many times. The unique thing about this is the world itself. It is a well written story with no dumb plot twist. The story is quite humorous while still having a sense of foreboding doom. It kinda compels one to keep on reading to satisfy the curiosity. If I had to nitpick something about the story it would be the length of chapters but author makes up for it by daily updates.I hope that the story and the author get what they deserve and it certainly deserves a place in Top 10.
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