Wow, what a strong start to a story that I believe has the potential to become one of the most popular books on this platform. I love the use of multiple POVs, as it allows readers to understand the feelings of other characters rather than focusing solely on the MC. 10/10! I highly recommend this novel!
Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style
"-Desu," vaguely Kenji end the sentence.
"Alright" I stand up and followed them, and to my surprise V, JK, JM, JH are outside in my room smiling.
Me too???
Sasha couldn't say a word. After a short while of utter silence, her eyes got filled with tears yet again.
Itachi looked ahead and saw that Chopper was leading him towards the two women of the crew. The first thing Itachi noticed was they were gorgeous, easily the two most attractive women he had seen and Itachi had spent extended time around Boa Hancock.
as they hug firmly and cry to each other
At this moment a voice, unmistakably Wolfshiem's called "Stella!" from the other side of the door.
You'll never know if you don't go (go!)
But the meteor men beg to differ
She touched the left side of her face as she struggled to stand with her own two feet. Everything was a blur and everything seemed to be moving on its own. A burning sensation in the shape of a fist radiated below her left eye and even though it makes her want to cry, she clenched her teeth to put up a sad smile. She did her best to try and see what was happening but all she saw was the man pushing her door away to claw what was left of what she had just killed.