The author writes great stories but never gets around to finishing them it could be so much better but we get left on a thread. Just wish the authors would be able to fully flesh out these awesome worlds he builds.
even though I haven't read it yet but it's looks interesting
Urban Tux is a really fun web novel with interesting characters and a lot of action. Tux is a great main character and his journey is compelling. Some chapters feel a bit slow, but overall its a good read. The writing is engaging and the story has depth. Would recommend to anyone who loves good stories with depth. 4.6/5
well since it`s my novel and i have been building the ideas inside my head for the past 6 years imma give my self 5 stars hopefully you guys enjoy reading my humble work its not much but thats my best so far.
I'm in love with this book, Han Chen and Yang liu are perfect together, the villain's enchanted Sister is also so good, continue with the good work. Your books are perfect.
hey there! can you change the ending of the novel a bit so that the bad ending could be changed into a good one.it's a request i hope if our translator can do anything about that?
interesting story deserves more attention take these five stars as a support
The perfect mix of sci-fi and modern elements keeps this novel fresh and intriguing. Fans of complex, layered plots will be enthralled by the depth of the story. Hence, ME!
The novel starts strong and builds a solid foundation... Only to build the story in a completely different area.Interesting premise and writing style. The author focuses on the 2 brother's storline utilizing the different circumstances of each to build the world and write the lore. The contrast is further used to go from micro to macro and from personal to political. Great usage and contrast. The concept is similar to RR Martin's Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) though this one is a web novel version and isnt as professionally done. Thats it for the good parts of this novel.Where this novel falls short is on focus and continuity. The set up at the start was great and would have been interesting if there was a follow through. The abandonment and trechery with lies should have had more impact on the characters but apart for setting there doesnt seem to be much effect on their personalities and character development. 1 MC was sentenced to death and seems to quickly recover and is too trusting too fast with people, there seems to be little to no trauma considering all that abuse and injustice. Its almost the same with the 2nd MC with everything being resolved by his bilief and hope that his brother survived and the flimsy and simple justification of 'would you have allowed it' reasoning for filicide (parent killing their child). Then theres the setting, sending a child to an academy and underutilizing the theme. The academy setting felt wasted and unnecessary quickly followed by politics meetings to arrange meeting. The forest of death quickly became the forest of looting and levelling up and all the built up tension was lost. In short the author planted too many seeds too early resulting in what feels like forgettable chapters and mini arcs.The beasts are unique from each other but familiar in lore which is the result of good choices from the author. Theres personality with each one but not enough that it fills the novel excessively. The author also doesnt fall into the temptation of making them too overpowered or pulling out world breaking mythical beasts left and right.This novel has great potential and I am invested in reading further in hopes of it getting better. Planning for main and subplots and relating that to character development definitely needs work however the writing style and world building leaves enough room to recover.The strengths definitely make up for the foils.
Cant Say anything here, honestly, i came here only for the event reward.
The author’s writing style is absolutely mesmerizing. The descriptive language brought every scene to life and The characters felt so real and relatable and i really look forward towards their growth as the story progresses. This book is a good read and it definitely has my attention.
Interesting, shameless handsome male lead, good plot and storyline, I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoyed my vampire system or shadow slave