Really really good read ovErall. Good translation, Even though character dEvelopment is fast. still very interesting. Story so far is good.
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This novel is kind of meh.. Good for those who like a sect building-ish genre but definitely in far ahead... The way he interact with people and his own system kind of awkward, like you can insult someone whole family today and yet you act like BFF in next day which I don't really like. Maybe author want to convey some kind of stuff he imagine yet he can't write it down perfectly or the translator screw up.. Anyway, not recommended by me..
Some editing would be nice. Would have kept reading but by chapter 3 I was more skimming the chapter. It has potential though so keep it up. Just remember to prof read.
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