I originally really like the Story and lowkey mcs and so i read the mtls up to chapter 80 and the i dropped the novel
The novel Was fine and although not without flaws( a bit repetitive, slow story development) it Was still a fun slice of Life lowkey MC read until the Worst Flaw that DESTROYED the Novel ... Nationalism
The Story develops more and more in the Direction
-China is the Greatest and Number 1
-America are all Evil Barbarians
-China Should Dominate the World because China is Number 1.
another fun story ruined by Nationalism, dont bother reading it, it just gets worse
has potential. chapters are very repetitive to pad word count which is incredibly irritating but i like the idea behind the story, so i will stick it out to see where it goes.
The main character is basically worthless. Just follows around random women. Has no backbone. Story starts of well. MC has decent goals. The bam nothing but a Simp.
Hi there author! After been reading a few chapters, I only can say that this is an amazing and well-written story, with a lot of effort and passion.
With this kind of books it's a pleasure to read!
Keep it up! Your story it's incredible!!!
Five Star support
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Five Star support
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Now, self-review time! (Slight Spoilers)
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1. What is RPP?
MMO meets Multiverse in the fantastic world of Infinite (literally). It is constantly evolving thanks to the incredible AI overseeing it.
The gaming system will begin simple and slowly reveal its depth as expansions are released. Lots of PVE, PVP, Combat, Lifeskills, Events, E-Sport, and more!
Expect incredible freedom! There is no such thing as starting Races and Classes: every Player finds/creates their own.
The NPCs have their own thoughts and aren’t just mindless lines of code. This gives rise to many entertaining interactions.
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2. MC
Jack’ MF O, the one and only! Expect a steady progression propelled by hard work and incredible game knowledge (not omniscient). He is OP yet not invincible and unfeathered by puny common sense...
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3. Harem and Non-Harem tag?!
Yes, both tags are present. The approach for IRL and Infinite will be very different. Games are meant for one to go wild! Still, the focus will always remain on the progression to the top.
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4. 18 +?
Yes, but do not expect too many H scenes. Quite frankly, just the language warrants a warning at times. Might as well bump it up to 18 + and have some fun, am I right?
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5. This novel is actually edited?!
When you find mistakes, point them out via paragraph comments, and I’ll fix them.
I publish every chapter on inkstone then open the published chapter in the app to check one last time for typos. The final edit takes about 10 minutes after every post.
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6. The author exists?!
Yes, I answer comments daily. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Synopsis + This Review + Chapter 1 = Our roadmap through this wonderful journey together!
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Thank you all for the support! ^_^v,
Your friendly neighborhood Zombie, aka CA!
I've caught up completely with this book so speaking as a MMO Gamer, I loved it.
I believe you can tell the author's passion from what he's written, and it is clear from this book that he is a fellow gamer and memer. I salute him. His ardor for games is so clearly felt within this book. A fellow gamer can sniff out a fake one like a dead Ugandan knuckles within a Bath and Body Works. This character, Jack, is the true embodiment of an Edgy, intelligent, and gamer we wanna be. I salute you, sir.
This book isn't for fools who cannot notice a simple Jojo reference. There are those who probably won't like it. There are those who are gonna feel that there are 'needless references', inserted solely for a wink and a nudge from the author to the reader. To those people, I say: SO WHAT? I welcomed those references. It makes me feel good because I know what they are. Is there something wrong with feeling good and getting an innocent giggle out of understanding a reference?
How could I hate the references? I love the memes bruh. (For future insights I have seen, for this book is too good for mere casuals)
So here's what I liked about this book:
1. I liked the main character
2. I like the setting the world will take after the game releases.
3. I liked the realistic feeling of an online gaming scene
Jack is a good kid. He's had a rough life. He's smart but stubborn, with a Lil spice of comedic timing and understanding. He's an malnourished kid too, should've ate more veggies. He probably didn't do too well in school as well lol. He could be any of my friends who play games. It's a caustic world. People have to survive the best way they know how, sometimes those ways are self-destructive. A lot of the problems with these types of fiction is that they're too drastic. Barely years into the future, the world will have created a new society, etc. and admittedly, it is pretty grim, but I still find it believable.
I also love Jack's explanation of the way online gaming works, down to its community. He clearly knows his stuff, from user names to avatars. There are some funny tidbits that can be made of his future knowledge.
For a comedic novel that should usually lack complexity and would be more of a middle-grade book, Its length and content is driven with the smallest of details which is so commendable, even if this book is a joke, the Author has some serious skill. Breathtaking work!
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You thought there would be more BUT IT WAS ME, ADAGIUM ALL ALONG!
Attempt 2: You also thought I wouldn't retype it all again so others could see it?!
Attempt 3: Bruh please, this platform is gonna give me an arthritis attack bruh.
Attempt 4: I better get some sorta compensation for this mutiny.
lets see..........................................................................................................................................................
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