Very good story.
Thanks for the work autor-san, i hope this got bigger because you deservet it.
Good luck for the future!
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It's damn good! I like the plot and your writing style is really good, it helps to visualize everything so clearly. My suggestion would be to break those dense paragraphs and to separate dialogues and descriptions.
Good work, Author!!
I am pretty much amazed as to how this novel is crafted. The FL is quiet and not presumptuous. Even if she was a top assassin in her previous life, she still acts her age and doesn't underestimate other people just because she has more experience. She is the quiet one beside her temperamental brother but her performance is outstanding. She is super low key. I am just a little down that I am already up to date and is itching to know more. Ahhh.. I just hope that there would be more updates.
I'll give another review after 50 chaps, but for now... I'm hooked man.The lazy protagonist and the twists of events really left me hanging... man! I can't wait for more chaps. Looking forward to it!!! ???
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the novel good but I'll just say the things I don't like, even tho the mc is the author of this book, I find it weird that he seemingly has knowledge of every forbidden evil ritual everytime and cause he's the author he can also rune speak?? I have never seen a novel explain such things in detail so I personally think it's annoying. then there's this trend where mc is too forgetful, little did he know that blah blah blah, like bruhhh, he's ruthless and doesn't confirm kills? he's an overthinking manipulator and he forgot something? I swear it's annoying, don't get me started on the beef he has with anyone and everyone
It gets better from the 11th volume onwards.
I will be 100% honest. I didn't really like it early on. But. The more I read it the more I found myself starting to like it? The charcaters grew on me, and the story seemed to get better for me. The superpowers are basic but with a uquie spin on them, or at least what I think is a cool spin... Jackson is by far my favorite character. He is super goofy but has been shown the be really powerful. Like stupidly powerful. The only main problome I even have is Irene... The way they were handled felt weird to me but I think I got what the author is going for?
Anyways the point I am getting at is that this story is really over the top and weird. And I like that. I read so many deep and dark stories that I thought it was refreshing to have a story where they make jokes.
#Hero X Ken for life.
At first it was a little slow for me to understand but around chapter 20 I figured stuff out and now I'm addicted to it binge read all 180 something chapters in one go did nothing but read all day
Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in...
Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla bla
Next paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla bla
Next paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla bla
Critics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read.
Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day.
Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc.
Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery.
World Background: 5/5- Very Good!
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Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
An awesome novel
Shameless review from the author. I know this is not the best of the story out there, but I am trying my best to make it interesting. If you like the story vote for it, write coments and post reviews. I would really appreciate that.