This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novelAnd lastly... Keep the good work, author.Selama tulisannya bagus, akan selalu ku ikuti ceritanya ?
First ever book written so let me know if it’ good or not probably won’t be the best thing in the entire world but hope it is good enough for all of u to enjoy!
A great world background, characters are great writing on point over all a great novel.I am not really fond of systems but loved this one due to the emotion backstory.Keep up great work author
Lol that wuxia novel got push back another week? Is it the third week? Let make it the fourth :)I like dododododododododododooddoododododododo
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I look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
this needs to continue asap. it's so good. there are prehistoric animals, giant beasts, giant insects, etc. to look forward to. such an adventure should never be missed by everyone .
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It is definitely a notch above the stories |have read here till now.I picked this up because it had someappealing tags & nice reviews, but gosh, the harem stuff is very overbearing. Wouldn't mind being introduced to some male friend of Jason's and having some sort of normal or serious conversation, instead of him being surrounded by gals every chapter. You know, might flesh him out beyond the Casanova that he is.As of chapter 8, the plot has progressedrather slowly – with only one tease of thesignificant samsara aspect. This progression is mostly drowned in the banter & frills the male lead indulges with his harem group.Will continue reading since it's somewhatentertaining to read.
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Okay, I'm hooked with the synopsis. I can get that you've already have a great world background. It's a potential great shounen storyline, with lots of adventures. My only suggestions is about the description part, I find it difficult to understand, that some parts may be a bit confusing. I'll suggest the author to have some re-read or proofreading to make improvements.P.S. I would keep on reading, if I find something, I'll comment so you'll make improvements.Keep it up!!!