The writing is lazy, hard to understand English. And a lot of dumb situations, for example: Oh no! I've encountered a problem x, no worries though I'll pull the solution y out of my a**.
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keep up❤️❤️❤️ waiting for the next chapters???
i want to see more of Zephyr, the story is still not clear yet , i read 10 chapters , but i feel like i will read more of it , come back when i finish
So far everything is good. It has the ability to invoke emotions out of the reader which makes for an awesome read plus excellent background for the main character and good world building. I wait with batted breath for more chapters too see how far the author can take this book
Hi everyone I'm the author and very exited to share this novel with you.This is my first novel so there might be typos but I try my best to proofread before publishing. If you find any typos or grammatical mistakes please notify me and I'll get to it as soon as possible.I request you to give this novel a chance and I have the entire story planned out so I'm not going to drop it.You can expect regular releases from me and constructive criticism is always welcome.Thank you for choosing this novel.
I love this storyline, I think it is absolutely amazing!?I actually heard the author is starting a whole new book, ‘Cultivation Through Artifacts’, and so far it’s great! GO CHECK IT OUT!!!???
This novel system is some unique and story are some unique and charector are some sence in world I like it also the world story are easy to I like it.
So our mc transmigrate to another world where there are martial spirits, they thought he was really talented until they discovered he has no martial spirit. Well of course just like any other novel out there, our mc 'suddenly' have found a cheat where he can devour martial spirits. So it is kinda cliche but If you are into stories like this, you could give it a try.
There is a lot of potential with this style of writing and I do not want to see it be ruined. The elements for a good story are there but there needs to be a lot more background building and show not tell. The story is being rushed and there are rough transitions peppered throughout the novel. I recommend taking your time to smooth out the story and make it flow. There are good materials present, but you have to use them well.
This is amazing thank you so much for it! The story idea is great and the writing is funny and well done. I'm excited to see where the story goes in the future.