The Fall of Endoria

This a great story but he should have a dog that is half god or something like that or a chile of the kubi and a dog summon or something like that.

Amazing story.It really is quite relatable I.I kinda like the mc.After you finish reading one chapter,you hold yourself to read another.The narration style is also satisfying,you don't have to fry your brain cells.

Okay, I'm hooked with the synopsis. I can get that you've already have a great world background. It's a potential great shounen storyline, with lots of adventures. My only suggestions is about the description part, I find it difficult to understand, that some parts may be a bit confusing. I'll suggest the author to have some re-read or proofreading to make improvements.P.S. I would keep on reading, if I find something, I'll comment so you'll make improvements.Keep it up!!!

Would rate it higher but not much in 20 chapters! My standards may be low but all I want is a story that can keep my attention! If it catches my eye I rate them on if I think this story could grow! So I think this story has potential but see where it can fall off quickly!

good relaxing story for me without those cringey indifferent Mc everywhere..

I am here for the fast pass don't mind me