speechless, your writing was so amazing (wow)I am in love with this novelyou details it so wellit's really amazing author my greatest wishes for you is to get tons of views and likes
another MC who feels betrayed after sis does not tell him about herself. females are petty. not wort it in my opinion
-Just good .-Story makes you keep reading but it also make you to throw it away.-Just read make your own personal opinion.- Progress of story is moderate, in some chapters filler maks you irritates.- Because of so many girls characters it is good for boys ???
good premise and I honestly liked it, however as I got to chapter 100, the writing became more and more frantic and chaotic. every character in a room has something to say and do, and it reads like a chaotic fight even when people are just talking.3/10 overall
this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?
To start this is not a story for everyone the author is developing the novel with serious themes like problems of fitting into a reality, how people behave and act on it even not liking it and the need for when people should be realistic and when they should put a mask to hide .And a good story and grammar also without much problems . The storyline is geared towards the teen audience but with a lot of drama from what was read our MC male simplifying and a simp has trouble relating to people and therefore hides behind a mask of falsehood and so the story unfolds the female MC and all the inverse of it is open with everyone and a great judge of character knowing when someone is lying or not that causes your problem in the story , relationship between them start because of this pointHonestly and the typical Japanese cliché story with love triangles between characters, annoying dialogues that makes your head hurt, think of it as oregairu only worse, honestly this kind of story is only for people who like this genre if not you will have to put up with a lotDon't be discouraged, author, your story is just not for everyone anyway, keep up your good work
The writing at the start was, if I can be frank, horrible. I almost dropped it after seeing the numerous misspellings and grammatical issues, however. The author has improved over time and has painted a really interesting world with colorful characters. If you have the patience, you will love the story development. Tryyyyy it!!!!!
A good read, I have enjoyed every chapter and always look forward to more, the only thing to complain about is the lack of chapters, give me more lol.
A nice story with lots of detailsI highly recommend it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Pardon me but at your 5 chapter/ week release rate it will take you 12 years to catch up to the raws IF they immediately go on hiatus.Ain't nobody got time for that!Seriously, release rate for this needs to be AT LEAST 3-4 chapters a day so you can catch up in a couple of years, hopefully.
The story is okay but I can read fully.
Argh…I literally check the book for new chapters like every hour