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I enjoyed the story it has little grammar mistake in some chapter it's enjoyable to read when you want something to kill time and I think it would be better if you change the name when people see it they think mc would ntr people not help them
A new world and virtual reality! Seems like a great combo. Being a fan of videogames, I can easily say you've caught my attention. I liked the start of the story, and the writing style, and I will definitely check the rest of the story. Keep up!
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Translation quality 4/5 Nothings Perfect in this worldStability of Updates 4/5 Nothing can remain stable in life let alone MankindStory Development 1/5 CH.1 MC at Lv 35 No info B4 That at AllCharacter Design 1/5 I Know Almost Nothing About Him at Ch 15World Background 1/5 Again No info B4 Lv 35 besides him being in the woods. Also Ch 15 so far NO actual info on stats/class choices/skill info etc at all author just says what mc has and not what its Cd is mana cost nothing this is more like a wuxia/xinxia then a VRMMORPG then anything i have not even seen the mc stats sheet in 15 chapters mc killed a elite boss solo and didnt even gain 1 lvl author leaves out almost all Vrmmorpg game info so far at ch 15
All in all a good read ? I enjoyed the world building, the different characters and the way the storyline is built. Tho if I may, I believe that by the end the author rushed things up a bit since even not being an english speaker as a first language myself, many mistakes where apparent in the last chapters that where not present in the earlier ones
I like the story (I have read 130+ chapters) but there are two things that I don’t like and those are the long and unnecessary descriptions and the grammar. But at least the grammer is nothing major (at least the author does not confuse he and her pronouns). If minor grammar mistakes and long descriptions don’t bother you then you should give the story a try.
I don't get why this book is rated so highly. I wouldn't waste your time, it's racist af as others have mentioned and the mc is a beta. One thing that pisses me off is that the female lead isn't fierce... she is an absolute raging btch. Like there is a difference in the two that the author seems to not know. It was fine when she didn't submit etc bit stupid but yeah. Then it went through the whole faze of them getting closer and It would have been cool af if they grew up like a prober fam. So she and the mc with acc love getting stronger in that time with the kids. But instead she "awakens" This completely destroys the story and it goes downhill that doesn't stop. I'm surprised how fast it crashed and burned... I mean nobody wants to read a story where the main character is a btch. Like I said before the author can't seem to tell the difference and thinks fierce translates to arrogance, btch, and literally all them shtty character traits. SO yeah don't waste your time. Unless you like the character I described which I am shocked if you do but yeah...
this was one of my most anticipated novel to finish. Everything from the beginning til almost the end was an instant classic for me. I had plans to re-read this novel another 4-5 times but the ending...is just too awful. its so bad that I regret ever reading any of the previous chapters. Please do not waste your time reading this novel, the author is a despicable troll.
I was laughing too hard that my stomach was hurting. This novel has a hilarious, fresh and enjoyable. The first 3 chapter seems a bit cliche, Getting a system, transport to another Continent that let you cultivate. Except that everything was very fun, there's no force plot like he suddenly comprehend some heaven defying technique, or some ultra jenius suddenly feel offend and want to bully the MC. Everything was fresh! The Author really bring a Fresh breath to the now toxic world full of cliche Cultivation novel. The system the MC got was a troll, I don't want to spoil anything but presently the system hasn't been fully explored by MC because of his Low Cultivation Base. This is the first review I write and English was not my First Language so have a mercy on me.
this novel isn't even cliché anymore, this novel is a bad copy of some popular novels, the begining is just so much like LOHP.the comment section is fun as everyone is predicting what will happen 30 chapters before it happens.still, i can't understand how webnovel put this trash this high in term of ratings and advertisement