ookk123
I like the book but you should update chapters more frequently keep on writing I support you and waiting for you to update chapters I hope your story become very popular
Its a good book.
What the hell is with that cover? I'm laughing my ass right now. ??? For that illustration I'll give you 5 stars. haven't read the story but will update my review if it's any good or bad.
Lemme just say this a great and finish this review quickly for people that just came here to look at the reviews a little.Pros:-mc isn’t a wimp-mc isn’t a simp- mc doesn’t seek a giant harem but has some of the most beautiful women in the world that are in love with him (some are obsessed)-unlike other harems the harem members don’t suddenly disappear only to never be heard of again. They are almost always with him and he cares for his women ALOOOOOOT.- he does not go around acting chummy and trusts everyone he meets. Has a heart that does not let others in easily as he went through some stuff in his childhood. Currently has a low number of people he “trusts” that can only be counted on ones fingers.-harem members actually have a personality and aren’t bland like so many other novels I read.-novel isnt very cliche other than the fact that a lot of people near him turn out to be op. But the reason they are actually makes sense unlike the others novels where mc picks up random girl that’s struggling in some weird way and WOAH WHO WOULDA THOUGHT SHE ACTUALLY HAS A SUPER INFINITY DIVINE HEAVENLY SOVEREIGN YIN YANG SPIRIT ROOT AND CONSTITUTION OF THE ANCIENT EVIL FIENDGODS AND ALSO SHES HEAVENLY EMPERORS DAUGHTER??!!!?!?. it makes sense cause though he hasn’t revealed it yet it’s obvious that most of the girls with him are due to some events mentioned in some of the earlier chapters. Mostly having to do with destiny(you’ll understand if you read it)- this could also be a con for some but you can simply skip if if you don’t like it as it wouldn’t matter much to the story. The story isn’t filled with lusty mc that bangs everyone and so far there haven’t been much smutty or $ex scenes ( whatever you wanna call it) but some people might like that so maybe you think this shouldn’t be on the PROS list but whatever.-mc does not back away from a challenge as he considers himself to be “extremely prideful” which leads him to be arrogant but it’s not the annoying kind. When he’s arrogant it’s funny to watch cause he embarrasses tf outta other people lol. Mc has only ran away from a battle twice but that’s only cause he wasn’t expecting it in the first place. The first one, though he was very weak at the time, he managed to counterattack the one that attacked him and swore he would someday kill him. The second one was already resolved by him.- mc isn’t stupid and not once has he put his loved in a a dangerous position cause of his actions. He also never lets someone get away from him. You know how mc in other novels fights a young master and young master gets defeated and shouts “ ILL BE BACK FOR REVENGE!!!!” While getting hauled away by his loyal bootlickers and mc just watches them leave like a total retard? Mc here did it a few times and that’s only because he was smart and noticed it would be disadvantage but finished what they started a few chapters later.- mc does not start as crippled trash ugly man with no talent. He was born and raised an orphan(don’t worry you won’t have to learn about his Chili’s hood by reading a lot of chapters) but was adopted into a family of some pretty noble people and become a very refined man. Looks normal at start but soon becomes one of the most handsome in the world( for those who don’t like normal looking mc)-not sure there are a few more but this is already too long and I doubt anyone would see this or especially read to the end.Cons:-sometimes the naming system is weird but it gets fixed in the later chapters.-author sometimes confuses names but that’s is also fixed in the later chapters. Lol that’s all I can think off. Anyway I’m waiting for more cause I finished all this in a day
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to short because currently there only two chapter and the first one being a very good and a master piece chapter i've ever seen (its a joke ;go check the first chapter by yourself) and the second chapter just literally freefalling out of nowhere . I just hope the author synopsis explain something a little bit like is it a xuanhuan in space or something , no just anything we need to know what is going on in there is there a feud or a coup d'etat wait .......its a xuanhuan hmmmmmm... yeah just a guy cultivating again and became the strongest in the world then another world cliche isn't it? please explain for those who already read the raw or investigate from a chinese reader (it can be from the chinese reader comments of course) also if there is any good xuanhuan out there some one can recommend because I once always read xuanhuan (until one day fire nation attack ,,,jk) but quickly bored of how repetitive the novel is so if there is a good one with a better mc that actually smart and good world background that doesnt just create an opponent from some dirt just because they need to stall the mc for the next arc . just say they going to the beach or something until they come back home to continued the next arc ( its hurt my head to see the old weak enemy became stronger because a treasure or some weaken demon gave them power and they just suddenly can kill his whole family/clan its stupid
warlock of the Magus world is one of my top 3 favorite novels, since this seems to be a work from the same authorIm super hyped about this! (Typing extra because 140 that’s why)
This novel is simply a mess. The author decided to use a futuristic setting(about 10000 years in the future) and saying how much people evolved only to paste an average cultivation template afterwards. Every ***** in this novel most likely lost about 90% of their IQ before being introduced in the story and A LOT of the chapters are just fillers,with the author repeating the same sentence multiple times albeit a bit changed.Even worse is the fact that after he started to improve a little(most likely due to negative criticism he faced when he released) it comes down as full blown nationalism,describing the white people as nazi and chinese as the superior humans and promoting the superiority of Asian mythology above every other myths.If you are bored you can give it a try to waste some time but if it goes premium DON'T waste your stones on this trash
There is nothing, i mean nothing, wrong with this novel. Me going out of my way, to make this review, is a testament to this. Yet i would like to speak a bit, on some things regarding, stanley and his demon succubus girlfriend. While it was a joy, to see stanley come out of his shell, and try to experience life. I've come to note that stanley and ez, share no similarities. I almost suspect, that if not for Stanley's energy or aura, whatever. Ez would have already charmed him, took all knowledge, information, resources, she could and strip him off his, individuality. And, yes while she does mention how all monomo? Or something forgot their names, are all not like that, it doesn't mean majority of them are not.And it's fairly obvious Ez, doesn't really view Stanley as his equal, sure. She loves him, that is fairly obvious too.But it's not love, like that of a man-woman, its how you would love a puppy, or a child, Ez thinks she knows better than Stanley. Not to mention, it's true how paranoid Stanley has been, but Ez has done nothing but disprove him. Sure she didn't mind-rape him, the moment she got her powers. But that doesn't mean she won't, she has already shown how impulsive, and how she thinks she knows what's best for Stan, what if she decided Stan was better off being her slaver for eternity. Sure, she did respect his wishes, and kept him a human, in his nature, but would she respect his choice if he decided to stay a mortal and die? What if she thought she knew better, what if she decides that it's better for earth to be conquered by her empire, who stops her?Stanley "looks" like he is the one who wears the pants, but it's also true Ez had never shown any respect for his decisions. Nor did she acknowledge them, i'm fairly disappointed regarding that.
less face slap than similar novel, start average similar to other novel, but after 200+ chapter the autor seems lost, didn't know how to progress with the story, the story become repetitive, and the end is become weird
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The story go really good just what i expected..is it complete?!
