Today was a sunny day , Suddenly , the sky darkened with black clouds, Lightning and rain fell everywhere, the earth started shaking, the city guards were immediately alarmed, was it the work of a enemy?
Just based on the prologue it's quite good. Also the release rate is good according to the per week release i see. Suggest me some books for similar taste boys.
I need more and more, I love this book so much and wants to read more about it, I love the movement and development of the book. I see this becoming one of the best books about love, although it’s too early I see a potential onscreen version
Please update more chapters , love the story and the thrill
Fan for a reason. I love fast burn romance books and oh, our author is so good at that. I love how she crafted the carnival and all that. Gosh! I'm inlove ???
I only have good things to say about this novel. Honestly, I have never been hooked quite as quickly as I was with this book. The plot is engaging, entertaining and also well thought out. The writing quailty is superb. The dialogue and interactions between characters feels very organic, and character personality quite fleshed out. One of the things I appreciated the most has to be the MC personality and smarts. Instead of taking the route most webnovels do and making everyone else astoundingly dumb to make the main character seem smart, the author has genuinely put in alot of effort towards making the MC come off as a genius compared to those around him, while still keeping the surrounding characters and antagonist smarter than normal. My only regret is that there are only 113 chapters so far, I read everything in just a few hours and just want more.
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للأن كل شيء جميل في القصه قرأت لأخر فصل الآن ألا و هوا الفصل 473 احداث كثيره حصلت مع كل الحماس إلا انه احس انه القصه الآن بدأت مع توسع الكاتب في العالم و درجات القوه و شرح بعض المسطلحات الجديده في القصه. Eng: For now, everything is beautiful in the story. I read to the last chapter now, chapter 473. Many events happened with all enthusiasm, but I feel that the story began now with the writer's expansion in the world and the degrees of strength and the explanation of some new terms in the story.
hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I don't like this book there are so many things missing here how does he get stronger by reincarnating why does he act the way he does to everyone why is he so impulsive why doesn't he consider consequences why are so many characters acting like they did nothing wrong why so many secretswhats with none of them being able to admit when they are wrong i like the idea the story has promise but there are so many things that make no sense and are not explainedakuna or whatever her name was is her only purpose to open the gate and keep people their? waste of a character mc could have been kinder to her get her to love him and trust him and then corrupt her to be a loyal servant and then he could have used her knowledge to carry out his plans and used her for his sexual desires as he is a demon at heart and they are very lustfulsame with sister, sister is supposed to have knowledge about the working of their village and if not then acquainted with people who know the working of the village and use them to conquer and use the village for whatever purpose for a demon as powerful as he was you would think he would understand the value of manipulation and using people to his advantage but he has this false feeling of superiority when he himself is a human nowthe things i listed above is a general idea of what can be changed to make this story better he needs to understand the value of manipulation whether it be to gain loyal people that can provide information and fulfill his sexual desires as he is a demon at heart (could include the body's sister there too if you want) and other things or just manipulation of emotions so he can gain support of masses, control of his emotions/desires and understanding that actions have consequences how can he destroy that many souls with no consequences from the celestials and divines and suchI believe thay once you work on these you will be on part to having a better story THESE ARE MY OPINIONS EVERYONE HAS THEIR OWN FEEL FREE TO DISAGREE (i read all chapters as of 8/4/23 (d/m/y))(i apologize for this being so long and for any grammatical mistakes i made but i genuinely want to see this story be successful so i just gave some criticism about things I believe would help the story.)
Watashi wa Kira yoshikage, I'm sorry for I have failed to save you from cringe please forgive me there was too much cringe. Until we meet again, farewell.