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I must say this is pretty interesting. The characters are alive and the story got me hooked up. I am looking forward for the next update. Cheers!
I am waiting for the deal to be completed. Then the episodes will begin to come at full speed. I ask you to wait a little longer.See you soon.Sanseiu
Absolutaly shameless Author Review here. I will try to be as consistent as I can and hope to get out at the very least 3 chapters a week. Hoep you enjoy
Good story which is in a good genre. Not too sure about the execution of the plot yet, since only a few chapters are done, but overall, based on what I have seen so far, it is pretty good!
An amazing novel with an interesting plot. Read the first chapter and was intrigued by it. The opening was good, dialogues are well written. Narration entices the reader to continue. Will look forward to further chapters. Good luck Author!
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Did you stop writing? When will you upload more chapter please make it daily dont just give up on writing i reaaly love reading the the novel please dont stop.
nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..
Hi, Just want to once again add that this is my first story so it is inevitable that i will make mistakes, I apologise for that but i'm doing this for fun, so don't expect a lot.Feedback is always welcome as i do want to look for ways to improve, and I don't a specific stuff set out so if you have any suggestions then you can also leave them and if i find it good i'll implement it. Hopefully you enjoy this and if not then fair enough. ThanksGave it 3 stars as i don't want to rate my own story.
this novel is actually pretty good only read up to 20 though
Okay so, I read a lot and I mean like I have an entire room filled with books which I have read atleast thrice or four times. I am a bookworm and one that loves quality and creativity. I am also a part-time unproffesional author and what I have just read blew my mind. A lot of hooks that grab the readers attention, not very heavy eastern fantasy which allows everyone to bond to the story and the interesting aspect of the MC. Van, well he is not one of those shallow MC’s who are either very good or very bad. We can see Van’s *****ness somethimes but somethimes we see his cunning and decisive actions. And these are not exaggerated, these are exactly what children are capable of. Introducing the eastern fantasy culture and aspect, the story is realistic in its own plot! I love it! I shall rain stones upon this glorious author and wish him good luck. I too hope to join the author community in the following months and I would definitelt like to talk with the Lord of Potatoes about character building’
