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, this a good progressing novel
The story follows a really typical format for back to the past cultivation stories. MC was the supreme god, he was translating or reading some tablet that pushed him back to the past.
MC is back to 2018 earth year but is on his original planet, he had been sent to earth by some mad cultist before but he's on his original cultivation world and plans to avoid earth.
The story follows the typical upscale fights, bead up a kid, his parents come knocking, kill them. Some kids throw shade on you, kill them. Some sick rich guy comes, cure and take his belongings.
Just the usual stuff, his distant family is a piece of sh*t so we can expect him to fight some level 1 or 2 then it goes to the level 3 uncle or whatever then the level 4 comes to take revenge. I'm sure it can even end up with him vs the country's strongest level 5 why not?
Well that's all typical cultivation novel MC is also an Alchemist and a Healer and every profession possible god probably. Also he's a slaughter fic MC he's kind of crazy.
Some guy blocks his way and taunts him so be cripples him, some girl throws shade on him so he threatens to kill her, some grieving family comes so he kills the 18 generations. It's that slaughter fic kind of story. Lol.
Really good novel, I want more but it has not been updated for 5 months. Author I need more chapters please
Pros:
+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell
+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much
+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from cliches
Cons:
- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor
- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE
- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader?
- Not many POVs explored to expand on world building
Conclusion:
It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)
Sincerely,
RobespierreK
Nice novel
This novel is terrifying, but it also manages to be a fun, interesting read. The characters feel very developed, very human-- and are easy to associate with. I love the interactions between the male and female protagonists. Action is well-written, easy to follow, and utilizes the environment to further reinforce the tone. The main conflict is something I haven't read about before in a web novel, so is refreshing and new. Oh, and the Author's mastery of English is virtually perfect.
I've been reading this for weeks now, but I figured to give you a review for that sweet, sweet XP. You get one of the very, very few 5.0's I've given. Great work, Author! Let's work hard towards the future.
This novel is Pathetic like seriously i am not even kidding . He has like 3 system how many 3. But still dumbass author make him weak and pathetic who sucks Harry potters dick.
He says he doesn’t want to make Mc too op to keep story interesting . But when you read the novel you know author is just removing things from his ass.
He has gamers mind but still dumbass Author forgets every-time he is scared , shaken, or can’t control his mood despite having Gamers mind.
The very beginning chapter when he makes wishes you understand what kind of idiot Mc is .
I tried reading it 2 time but cant its literally torture.
To be honest this novel is **** . And author compromised the quality for quantity . I wish there were minus rating I would have given them . But sadly this is lowest rating I can give.
You can see from the rating this novel is pathetic
If you like MC turned NPC novels then this should fit your taste.The MC starts as a mountain bandit and works his way up with his system unique to him and has to kill other NPCs and players to gain strength. The progression of the novel is pretty quick and there haven't been any pitfalls yet within the first 39 chapters. Based off experience, it seems like the MC will go onto a linear path of suppressing players and continuously leveling up his faction until he becomes unrivalled. If this is your kind of novel I suggest you give it a shot.
its just god mode 24/7 + teenage love. I just cat read this novel. If u are 15years old or less you can try it. But for anyone 16+ it will be a terrible novel.
such bad writing...it just log story..... ... .... .... .... ..... ..... .. ... .... .... .... ..... ....... ... .... .... .... ..... .....
I’m not good at leaving a good review in order to help the Arthur by giving suggestions, so I’m just gonna leave this smiley face :)
stereotype chinese novel you knowas if I had not collected all the stereotypes into a single novel until page 30, I could not read the rest, my brain did not removeJoking aside really clums uptalented mc + lover / fiance betrayed + golden finger + everybody belittles + young master of the clan etc.