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worst novel that ever existed here, humans are equal to robots and within 2 days he says he "loves" his parents and says he will protect them until the end, a person from the land who is 20 years old within 2 days said he loves 2 strangers and calls them father and mother ... example: you reincarnate in another world and this happens, you take the body of a family and everything, gain your memories not feelings "MENMORIAS" NOT FEELINGS, and you are healthy conscience within days, not hours says you love two strangers ... just say don't read this.
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Bruh this Nivel something else ??? synopses had me thinkin it was a revenge novel. bulllllllShiiiiiiiit where is the backstabbing? Where is the revenge,wherE is the potential rival All we getting is a trAumAtized boy with trust issues and a potential harem that might not go anywhere becaue my guy Is always feelinglike something aint right ??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️theonly thing i can give this novel is the writing quality is mad nice
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There are a couple of things that don't make sense... the mc shouldn't be that fat...He bikes to university every day and because he is at university he wouldn't spend anything on takeouts or tons of junk food to save money. It was also mentioned he didn't spend money like water and always saved what he earned. Boosting the fact that this makes little sense...To me, it just feels like you made him like that as a joke to try and make it funny. Leading to this being extremely forced...I'm not trying to hate, I'm just stating the fact that it just doesn't make sense giving the background you bought him upon. I also feel like him being a "chubby" elf is going to be a reoccurring joke throughout until he slims down from the training.For me, this is just going to annoy tf outta me as I will always think back to this and how it was forced anyway leading to all mentions of it just annoying me more each time. If that makes sense?I hope this doesn't happen constantly with the forced try at humour as it would be extremely disappointing. If you want humour it will flow naturally in the story. There is no need to force it as it will just bring down the story as a whole. Oh, another thing is his chosen name. Like wtf? Who cares what it means in Chinese? He is an elf... chose an elf name. His own name Eldrian? Is more fcking elfy than Haru... If he was a human I wouldn't mind him having the name Haru but he is not. He is an elf... It's like the mc is a dragon and calling it Haru. It doesn't fit at all. The immersive feel of the book is again compromised by doing this. I am assuming the Author is chinses? Again this is not hate so don't take it as that. It's just you are writing about an elf so why give it a human name? That sort of thing. So far it isn't looking like a great book but I haven't read a lot yet. I will read further and change the review depending on how it reads later.
This story has Action, Romance, Drama coming from teens who love Each other and witness friends and family who Die on a jpurney to keep each other safe.
Another cultivation power fantasy that starts off very slow but has the potential to be really good. This may be the book for you so give it a try.
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One had to know...Pronoun mistakes: him her he his she "She looked like a fairy as he walked down the staircase. He stunned the crowd with her beauty"Replication: He was so angry and angryGeneral statements that don't make since: "They went to catch the rescue"MTL MTL MTLRead up to ch 78 / Lame, done and done and done