devanshbanga
Alright, so far, this story has been a great read.The translation quality is great, and I don't really get confused by any strange phrases like you might see in some translations.Stability of Updates is not really applicable, so I'm keeping it at 5 for the rating's sake.The story development feels nice and well-paced. The MC discovers new things about himself in a natural manner, and his relationships with the people around him also develop well.The character design is just... magnifique! Finally, an MC who isn't completely brain-dead! This guy actually thinks about the possible consequences of his actions, has flaws, works to fix said flaws and, most importantly, actually learns from his mistakes! He feels like a real person instead of a caricature!For the world background, considering this is still only at chapter 60 because of the trial read, I'd say that it's well-developed. Anything relevant to the story gets explored pretty well, while anything unrelated gets a quick explanation before the story moves on. It's not exactly the most detailed and intricate world ever, but it's nice and simple and doesn't detract from the story.Overall, solid 5/5, hoping this gets picked up!
The fact that the fairies are all girls and perverted is an interesting twist. I love how each element has different personalities. Was a funny twist making the light fairy sound like a hoodlum. Overall I think that this book has great potential if the author continues writing it.
First of all i will say this novel is good and its have a refreshing vibes its not like the other novel that the mc is just want to establish a company or want to become a actor just to have a sex in any beautiful female that theyve seen.. so for me i will rate this novel 5 star.. its good and have potential also its has many words.. ????
