Looking at the stars was fine and all but... Why does it seem like Jenna was crying?
He then cast a scanning glance at Lin Fan before speaking, "I see you are still standing. That means, you are next to execute!" as a wide smile appeared on his face.
Author a quick question ....every picture you posted on discord ..are they all going to be harem members?...even the gods??...
it's amazing story really love Arthur his design character personality and everything great novel
though the novel is not nad i have seen that Chinese author's are extremist and racist.Extremist in a sense that they will develop the plot to condemn others.Racist as we can see in hod and devil world and the lightning brand novels etc....Seriously dissapointed in them .if you think other people are all the se because of some people's crimes than the same goes to you too.now i think my opinion of the chinese is as bad as they have of others ?
I'm loving the flow so far. it is nice and refreshing
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The meaning of life, or the answer to the question: "What is the meaning of life?
I love this novel. The fight scenes are simply wonderful and easy to follow while complicated at the same time. The concept behind the story is like a breath of fresh air. Even the occasional typos don't reduce it's beauty. I WANT MORE
The language of the novel is very concise and easy to read, I really enjoyed being able to understand what is going on clearly.Characters are well defined, some lovable automatically (BABY THEO!) and their interactions are very well done and written. I really am enjoying this novel so far, and am interested in learning more about the world as it continues!
|| This review will only be limited to volume 1 as I will wait for volume 2 to continue reading.|| Writing Quality [ 4 stars ]: It's good, but there are still a decent amount of grammar errors.|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: The release rate is from 2 chapters/day to 1 chapter/2 days. It's quite unstable to be honest.|| Story Development [ 5 stars ]: The story is interesting as of volume 1, the author did a great job at building the foundation for the main plot. Ellena's development is still too fast in my opinion as personality isn't something easy to fix, considering her past. Overall, the character development is not the best, but I've seen way worse. || Character Design [ 5 stars ]: It is good, but you can add a little extra detail ( like the point that is unique to that character ) to improve both the word count and sense of immersion in the story. || World Background [ 5 stars ]: Since I've just read volume 1, the world building only centered around 2 towns but it will improve later as this is still the early stages of the story. The world was built brilliantly by the author and the power of 'Ellena' actually went well along with the story|| Extra opinion: You should absolutely try this story out. I'm sure it will not disappoint you. As for me, I have weak resistance against cliffhangers so I will read after every volume is completed. Total score: 4.6
it's a real good story the only real problem I have with it is the fact that it takes so long to update about once a month or so for each chapter