imWold
Not recommended, first 6 ev points to unlock ear awareness?? Instead of evolving pet to reduce death count then waste another 20 ev points to ear awareness like didnt he unluck that already i dont like this novel which anyone can do better if they are in mc’s position, mc is metally ill
The plotline gets weird and nonsensical. The FL is dumb and stupid. Having the gift of premonition but disregards all the signs. She is all talk. Lucky she has live that long. They are running away and she chose to swim and dilly dally on a lake instead of hurrying for safety. Who’s dumb enough to do that? She must have been dropped in the head when she was a babe. Im out. I can’t read a story portraying a godly female who is stupid and ridiculous. Waste of time.
As of ch. 37 the Mc is a wuss, clown and an idiot of highest order. Nothing special about him even with the powerful cheat he has in the form of white lotus which captured the souls of 4000+ magus and the clown has absorbed some of them yet still has the intelligence of a rock.. Tho this statement is a bit unfair to the rock.
Loving the story so far, its a little fast paced when there's nothing important and keeps the romance at a slower rhythm but still enjoyable.
The story keeps its self fresh (at least in the first 31 chapters) and lets the reader enjoy the story and its pace.
Greatly recommend it.
For the people that think its yuri, it isn't...
looking forward to a new horror story but from the setup of this being a bus full of college students I can't imagine this being a very long story compared to other novels. Could someone tell me how long this novel is in raws?
So it's this a villain Mc? Where's the tag?
I really liked this book the world building is amazing, but the character development is terrible and it’s fate for every character to become hella depressed or die, it ruins the unique concept of the story and overall it’s a tragedy that such a good concept ended up as an edgelords mess. Do not recommend
It's great. Keep up the great work.
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Author here, I'd appreciate the feedback of chapters if you have the time. I'm a new author so I might tend to miss things. Leave a chapter comment or anything and I will rectify mistakes. Thanks.
cautiously looking forward to this novel.fjoekendividnkeowosmf,flpeowjd,dcloforkekdkcorokekwldkcmrmek2i9qpdpkfmfmfkeo29jdmcmlspsocmcnvnfjd
lol roasted by Aarav_jain who don't even have a profile picture poor author
