Top tier novel!It got everything I would expect and less!!It can even make me bang my head against my table!!!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………!!!!
I had read a few chapter, dozens of it... And I had to say, I kind of miss the old style of game world based novel... Now, it just feel complicated and had alot of stuff that should be simple but being describe in confusing manner.. But maybe it just me who can't keep up with this new style..
if u are die hard gamer then this book is made for you .you got many characters with details .author put lots of efforts in writing everything.keep it author.
i love the uniqueness of MC and Pet , amazing writing style for me ,i am waiting for milk ,Thank You Lol.............................................
I hope this novel would be picked and published soon.????????????????????????????????????????
The idea is really good just needs more polishing in writing and stroy telling. It would had been better to know more about mc in the first chapters. There are times that need more explaining about the things happening but overall all of it can be fixed or with enough time it could be better than now. Keep it up author. Take care.
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this is the good Novel for the new author,keep it up
5 star rating for a well put together story. It's embarassing to say but this is the first story I felt so attached to, 100% honesty. Reading this story gave me chills though, a man with that much power, i love, love, love it. Gotta say I look up to the author for having such talent.
I really hope you will come back soon and continue this story, your book is why I installed webnovel
Normally i would rate a novel fairly or atleast try to. Not with this novel tho as i can't understand what's going on.Unless someone starts a proper translation i would not recommend anyone to read it, as they even go premium at one point. It's a MTL and they go premium? I'm not sure how much lower they can go...