I really liked this story at the beginning but now I am not so sure. The concept is good as it diverges from the typical xianxia plotline/tropes. The only problem is the harem as I think that the story would be far better without it. I am looking forward to how it develops further down.
??????????????????????????????????????????????I wish I was as good at writing as you, you are really talented, and it is amazing to see you put it into incredible use, I have only read the first chapter, but this is an amazing novel, all I can day is, you did a really good job, keep up the good work.
Liked it... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
let's make this novel number 1#. this is the best one that i have readed here on web novel so far. keep up the good work Czester. p.s what got you started on writing this novel.
hey Mr author is there going to be any more updates? don't take my prey away from me it's the only enjoyment I have left... when are you going to give me another update?
Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!Raw, please!
kindly update dear... he himself is surrounded by so many toxic people who he considers loyal... but I want Carter to believe in her this time... Otherwise, I will give up their relationship for the time being...
I really like the cover, but I do think it would stand out more if it was a different color. The grammar is off a little and a few words seem to be missing when reading the story, but the author uses great descriptive words that help the reader get a more immersive read. Great story overall.
Quade is amazing I think the way make a awesome couple
Lovvvvvveee this book had on you at the edge of your seat. The ending couldn’t be more perfect.
As from the tiltle you will get the idea of the whole story,waiting for the next chapter,and you can't wait for the next.
so good as usual