The character design is quite bad, for example when did magikarp become a gyarados and when did he catch a litten. The story development also needs work, you need to slow down a little and show him bonding with his pokemon.
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I really love this on-going story so far. It's like riding a roller-coater; full of twists and turns; unexpected death just waiting for our twelve protagonists who were more or less forced to play the death game of some psychotic killer cowardly hiding behind the walls of a supposedly grand hotel situated in a seemingly deserted place, almost like a desert actually. A page-turner and hard to put down because you also take a chance in deciphering the code with the main characters, giving you the feel of being there with them as well, fighting for your very life. I hope the author would update regularly. I really want to know what will happen next. Dying to know who is the killer. I want justice for those who died (and will die) because of the fatal games. No apparent reason. Just plain game of death.
Website : qidian china Views : 790thousandRating : 8.2(181 ratings) Chapters : 835Status : ongoingWord count : 2.83million.................................
It's a dungeons and dragon(DND) novel. Mc plays a game under Call of Cthulhu (CoC) settings which means it's the hardest difficulty. The turn off is how strictly they are making it DND with stat checks and dice rolls for every action. I couldn't recommend this unless you really like DND because it's not really immersive.
Come on buddy you need to catch up. You took a long break cause of your laptop issues but you must have atleast drafted many chapters. Please please release them all. Let us fans have a nice chap marathon. Thanks for the novel.
Here’s a great story obviously written by a pragmatic and smart individual. Perfect delivery of lines that are borderline painful and hilarious at times. The punch comes unannounced.It’s the right mix of sarcasm, laughter and a slap of reality in a fantasy realm with characters and schemes so believable I as a reader applaud it. Enjoyable and worthwhile read so far! I hope the quality will stay consistent, if not improve as the chapters go by.
I am really enjoying it. Please let us have more. I like that it has some novel themes and it is funny too. I really like The Library of Heaven’s Path by the same author. I would spend my fast passes on this.
Low key but op mc........... Can't say Great novel but it's still good. More than 400 chapters in MTL ver..................................................................................
Author-nim pls continue the story, I loved reading this. ?
I like it. It has good updates so that's why you the author should keep writing more and more till you can't write anymore. Though I'm not a professional at writing reviews I try so keep doing your thing author
this is a plagarised book. please don't give this guy money.he does not deserve to have this book on webnovel this is a terrible use of this sitr.