BrianCevallos
Wow... I was skeptical at first, but this story is totally different. it's a unique sci-fi narrative with nemerous mind bending plot twists.Seriously, I had to keep going back to previous chapters just to make sure I'm following...
the story really has potential theres no grammar mistakes so its a smooth read, theres actual logic and reasoning behind how he uses his magic and combines spells etc. im writing this review at chap 31 so obviously there hasnt been a lot of progress but i do hope for more interactions with other characters who are also (hopefully) well written. for the other characters i mean not just dickriders also people who dislike him/ have business with him etc. overall grat potential def give it a read and i hope the updates keep coming steady
After 40 chapters, for trial read, it was enjoyable. I'd really like to read more. It's funny, fun and is about having fun. Sure it's a 'system' story but don't hold that against the story as it's still very enjoyable.
I love this novel. It's really interesting and one of the best novels I have read. Great work author!!The emotions, characters,story, everything is way beyond perfect. Each chapter makes you want to read the next.
A must read.
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