Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Just for remembering that Iowa existBecause almost no one ever talks about it compared to other states that have well known business and land marks
Straight to the point this novel is trash. I really question peoples taste when this dumpster fire that seems like its a fanfic written by a teen gets above 4 stars. The premise of this novel seems decent in theory (even if it is a rip off of fairy tail and D&D). But the author is straight trash at writing even with a decent idea; the translators doing no favors either cause they are pretty bad too, not unreadable but enough to constantly take you out of the story. Anyways if you feel like reading this novel which is practically 90% exposition I won't stop you, but I don't take responsibility for any brain cells lost.
It is good, better than alot of other fanfics I have started reading. So yes, I would recommend giving it a try before deciding.
Keep up the good work author!
"SIGH"... Another Garbage ..
nothing clear . no character .. no background ... fast based ... no clear power levels ..
Novel has already been translated in other websites up to chapter 452
Deserves to get picked
I'm currently loving it
Characters are good and the plot is currently going at a good pace.
There isn't enough chapters to actually judge the book but right now it's great.
Oh, now I know why a lot of my coworkers slack off! They just awakened this system, it's not because they are useless bums. I didn't know how common this system is.
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The Beginning is Great. Even though it's just a prologue but it describes the world background very well. I'm looking forward to it. Well, I'm not a fan of heavy books but I'll try to know it a little. Good work.
I have to say, this story is extremely well written. I was originally just going to read a chapter, but it was so interesting that I finished all of the chapters so far. The descriptions and world building are very good and it gives an looking feeling of existential dread that is very compelling. So well done and I hope you'll continue your work