RedX43
That's my personal opinion so don't take offense.The writing quality is good. Some mistakes here and there but acceptable. The writing style seems a little bit weird as the author tries to make things sound very powerful: Divine that, Divine this. Some logic mistakes too, like those assassins. No one would send some weak chickens like this to assassinate an high ranking noble. Descriptions are too long. It leaves less room for imagination which I think is an essential part of reading. The fights also seem too slow because author writes too much detail.As I don't have that much information about the story it is unpredictable. But at first sight it seems like a standart continental war story with fantasy as foundation and some schemes in the background.Mc seems like a regular Isekai-Mc: Strong-willed with cheats.The world is a big fantasy world with many races. Powerlevels explained clearly.All in all its nothing really new, while every story is unique on its own. It has quite many logic errors.It may sound harsh but it's mostly because I have high standarts as I've already read so much and find many stories predictable.
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I cannot believe so many people are enjoying the novel.
Collections and all, thanks for the support.
Remember, if you like it? Add it to your collection and a vote won't do any harm to my confidence.
Thank you once more.
NOT GONNA LIE AUTHOR I LOVE THIS NOVEL OF YOURS I KNOW IN THE FUTURE THEIR ARE GONNA BE BAD PEOPLE AND GOOD PEOPLE THAT WILL TALK TRASH ABOUT YOUR HARDWORK BUT DON'T MIND THEM THEY ARE JUST SOME STUPIDS.
SO YEAH I WILL READ THIS NOVEL UNTIL YOU FINISH IT SO STAY POSITIVE AND IF SOMETHING HAPPENS OR YOU WANNA STOP WRITING IS FINE BUT SAD TO SO IM ENCOURAGING YOU TOO FINISH YOUR NOVWL
I love the story but the way his family members treat him I can't accept I can't keep reading it I did like the first 100 Chapters the mom pissed me off.
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His novel is good if you want good character building, pretty solid plot, and good writing. On the other hand though, it gets tiring due to all the shenanigans happening to the MC to the point that it just gets REALLY tiring.
Author wrote that the novel would focus more on the romance but God, where is it?
It's taking WAY TOO long that interest just fades away. I'm gonna be dropping this unfortunately. May come back when some actual progress is happening.
But seriously, there's way too much filler and unnecessary moments that it's making me lose interest.
Writing style and plot is amazing, but it takes too long. I wouldn't be surprised if actual romance happens around 700 chapters.
Anyway I'll be dropping this and maybe come back in the future and hopefully, by then, the tags are actually being true to itself.
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I didn't even read a single chapter of this novel.
author you should do something about the picture you choose for novel cover, even though these drawings are good but you should use picture like other novels.
sometimes I didn't even want to read the synopsis just because these colorless drawing feels like an eyesore.
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me:
Good story so far, with a mixture of comedy and action.
Hope u keep up the good work and not drop it in middle.
Best of luck!
