The general idea of the story is okay, but the translation quality is really bad. There are sayings that make no sense and the characters feel fake. One moment the mc will be calm and then in the next moment he will be raging. Also the pace of the story is both fast paced and slow at the same time.
character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the his words ironically.
Wow author.... That was amazing. I think you did a great job by mentioning 'you' instead of using any name which made me imagine myself in the MC shoes and you know... I was like... Imagining myself conversing with Mandeep(ofc, that's you to be precise, at least according to me. And even though I don't know you, I just imagined a person in your place and got well into the play).
And the other thing is, when I was reading that fungus attack, actually I got such a dream. So in that dream, one of my fathers friend( a scientist) has warned that the whole world will hit a fungus attack which spreads faster and faster in rate and in two days the whole world will be in its control. But, no proofs for his claims and the world marked him as crazy.
However, I believed in him and we were making a spacecraft to leave earth and find some other safe place to live. And the fungus I mentioned was something similar like you mentioned. It will ocupy human brains and control humans. However, that fungus was stupid(I have to say) ... So we estimated the attack will be after three months, but our estimations are false. In two months, world got attacked.
By God's grace, my scientist uncle already made a spacecraft, well, he made a small spacecraft, which I turned it big using big light(probably I saw lots of doremon stuff that day to get big light in my dream) and then we were ready to leave planet... Well, I think I spoke alot of unnecessary stuff.
So coming to the point, that was an awesome book and already recommended few of my friends. Keep up the good work dear author. I am cheering for you. ☺☺☺
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The idea is interesting, the execution is amazing and the quality is high, not to mention the insane chapter release speed. In conclusion: great story, great speed, great author.
This novel is good. At first, it was a little confusing but it become clearer. It is good, the Translation could be better though, but I don't have a choice even If I complained here.
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Its an amazing story and the idea is very good, but the grammar, punctuation, spelling is horrible, i could barely read it and it decreases the overall enjoyment of the story
When I read the synopsis of this novel, I just chuckle and laugh hard!! ? ? ? ? ?I would just think of it as Fang Yuan from parallel world with super cheat... Finally Fang Yuan wouldn't have to train his own Gu in desperate... I bet this parody will be funny af. ..... ? ? ?
Thanks Bro??. I was hoping webnovel would translate this one too but thanks for translating it!??????????????????????
I was really immersed in your story author the mystery really got me thinking.There are only a few mistakes I would like to address is about the setting since there isn't much description about the area and I'm still confused about what the characters look like. However you story is amazing keep it up
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