My review is base on what I read so far and also includes the review of some people who read in advance of this novel.1st the novel filler is to much I mean to much to handle author just insert chapters of nonsense like it was normal.2nd the characters are so prostrating to read. The mc was so far comical with the harem no touch attitude. If this was japanese I can understand that but as chinese novel it is a huge insult towards chinese harem. The mc womens are also hard to swallow the author seem to wanted to create a tsundare women but it mess up big time. As for the enemies imagine enemy you see at chaptet 10 or something you still see them around chapter 500. The author loves to save enemies and recycle them.3rd story development. This one was rather good at first. But the author just love to troll and keep making the story on a never ending loop. Keep on introducing hidden story line while living them unfinished.Finally it was a good story to pass time but a reader has a botton line as well and mine has perhaps cross it so i decide to give up and stop reading this..
One of my most hated novel, It is in my Top 10 Novel I should just forget and stop reading. Then again I hated this novel and I think everyone knows why but for the sake of reading I can still read this I think. My first impression about this novel is horrible, seriously what kind of an assassin that is so poor and idiotic. The MC is clearly a masochist as he love being insulted and downgraded by women as shown all over the story. Clearly their is a very lack of understanding when it comes to Romance. And this novel is OVERFLOWING with MISUNDERSTANDING scenes. Their is no HAREM so far but If their is then it is just to much B*llsh*tting at this point the last thing you want in this novel is a harem.The Main Character is the biggest loser of all in this novel. He is being downgraded by every women he meet. He clearly has skills but the author make a story where just to show case the AMAZINGness of the MC which is very idiotic and bland. For example a case that was not solve for ages and MC just solve it easily. A problem that big CEO and blah blah can't solve was just solve by the mc so easily. It is so idiotic that main problems in the story are being solve EASILY by the MC. Take that part where the 2 b*tches was kidnapped, The father is self proclaimed powerful business man his right-hand man is a self proclaimed powerful at first the author SHOWS their attemp of saving the Kidnap b*tches and wasted many chapters of this and that by the end of the day MC save the 2 B*tches with 1 chapter alone in the most IDIOTIC way. This clearly shows that the author just want a MC save the day theme which is very very very BORING and IDIOTIC!Now lets talk about the girls in the story, I wanna first mention the 2 B*tches whom was introduce early in the story. I seriously find them Horrible to the point that reading them is like chewing broken glasses. I seriously start to question the mentality how this kind of characters are being created. I seriously hated them and often skip the part where they appear since I often just read idiotic line of this and that. Yet despite not reading them you won't really miss anything.As for other girls they are very much one sided, They appear here and their without follow up especially that police women, she only appears if the author feels like activating the MC save the day option. The only decent girl so far was the MC POTENTIAL girlfriend although her only flaw was her paranoia but that was justified because of the experience her best-friend encounter. But the author seems love to troll to much and even this girl is just in the POTENTIAL girlfriend line and so far not the official partner of the MC in the story. So far I feel like author plan to make a BL story as almost every girl in the story dislike the MC. They might have a few crush on the MC but the HATE is overflowing to the girls. The author might wanted to have a Tsundare type of character but all I can say is Sadist women all around the MC.As for the Villains of the story. They are a Masterpiece actually the author made the villain here so idiotic that I can only praise them this much. Imagine a villain that appear in the early 10's chapters now good news you can still see the same villain appearing around 500+ chapters later or more. Was he a big time boss enemy? No for crying out loud this villain is just a small time minor enemy yet keep appearing here and their doing idiotic stuff and being highlighted like it's the end of the world. On the other hand BIG TIME villains are being thrown behind the scene like some shadow or something. The most Idiotic part is this Villain are being defeated easy especially if author activate the MC save the day option. Imagine a nonsense chapter of enemy planning this planning that, force reading enemies POV doing this and that. Forcing you to read to much b*llsh*tting of enemy side. Then author activate the MC save the day option and booom all the nonsense defeated in the most idiotic way.Why this novel is trash summary? (it's a bias POV from me)To much Dragging (even filler chapters paled compare to this novel)No Important development all plot is going in circles in a never ending repetitive loop.To much explaining this and that. A chapter can be sum up in 1 - 2 sentence.Villains are very idiotic to the point that you even question your own definition of a villain characters.MC save the day option(you can notice author are repeating this skill all over the story) If only he can save the story in an epic why but sadly the way he save the day is very idiotic most of the time.The Female characters are TRASH especially the 2 B*tches.and so on...
I really have no clue why you ruined this novel. It was going at a steady, and good pace. The story was good, and interesting, but you just had to ruin it with the NTR yuri…
its not bad.
The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion.There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
author update please
this book is great ... I love how it keeps me wanting to read on to find out what happens next.
great book
The storyline goes just fine. The updates should be more frequent
Nice story very steamy lol
update plzzzz
More chapters please and thank you