A reincarnated MC, who does not have the memories of the host, and as such in a refreshing twist is not bogged down by stereotypical revenge. A cold mC who is equal to all. There is some Japanese stereotypes but more making of it.
Honestly I really like this book or novel and I want the author to continue it( but the author should develop a relation ship other than friends with lan Yun c'mon author you can do it) it's not a perfect 5 but it's still one of the books that I didn't think i would read other than R-18 ones so nice job auyhor???
The plot was nice, I'm getting curious about what will happened in the end of this story already :) LOL.I like how the story goes as the MC try to live a normal (Who doesn't? Everyone wants that) Good job author keep it up!!
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Thank you for everyone who reads and supports Picturesque. I didn't expect that a lot of you will appreciate my craft. I'm working on additional chapters daily to manage the story well. ?
someone told me to watch boruto as its great but I'm sure that isn't true but they also recommended that I watch The Misfit of Demon King Academy but how can I believe that's a good show when they recommend boruto to people
This is a great fun adventure read. I don't know what that other reviewer is whinging about the protagonist being annoying. I found him hilarious. His personality makes this story much more humorous and refreshing than your average webnovel. Also had to feel for the poor guy, hated by his own shoddy parents for apparently bringing them bad luck. I can fully understand him hating them and being happy they're dead. I enjoyed reading his adventures in the fictional world he soon finds himself in. Here's hoping he pulls through and makes the hot girl his wife haha. From a technical standpoint, the writing is of a good quality with minimal typos and the prose flows nicely. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good fun adventure story with plenty of humor.
I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!
I wanna get you all ready cause in 2 days i will end up giving you a new chapter and this time im gonna have like 15 . Drafts of the thIng so expect as much perfection as i can possibly . Manage i will make it big Very long im talking 30 to maybe 40 pages Long depending if your like me who reads things through slides . but hope you enjoy It and yes i am very shameless