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Same First Story on all cultivation novel. Childhood gal ruing their marriage something. A good for nothing boy who are weak. Powerfull family. Bullying. Faceslapping. And more of it. Typical MC background.
the story at the beginning is really good, and interesting. The world building was decent and the mc is smart, and a little bit conniving. Everything is good until later on in the novel where then everything becomes kind of forced. Certain actions just don't make sense. one example of this is the character development of the mc from selfish loner(except his brother) to a somewhat caring and socialable guy. However, even with this change in personality he doesn't help others when it cost him nothing. like giving potatoes from his infinite potato shooter. I'm not saying that the mc should be a saint, but he actually gets benefits from doing this from the system which forces him to do good(sincere thanks helps him unlock OP weapons). The system itself just seem to stop working later on after the mc copy enough abilities and just doesn't trigger quests that much. Some situations are written in a forced way to make the mc act in a certain direction, which to me ruins the emersion of the novel. Even with these flaws I feel that this is a decent novel compared to others on this site, so check it out if you want.
I love the characters. I'm currently reading it and I'm so hooked! I'm really getting curious about it. I love how it flows. Can't wait to reaD more. Job well done.