I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*.
Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before.
Points to ignore while reading:
Mc personality
Sidecharacters personality
Power level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak.
If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines.
These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.
i dont know why there is no review(yet)...
but this book premise is good(i think)...
im not reading it yet. im waiting for someone to give a proper review.
for now, to support this, i give my 5 stars.
have a good day
I just love this this fic, so I'm giving it 5 stars.
Okay so the story is really interesting and the system is quite unique. I was a little disappointed with the synopsis because it really didn't do the story justice.Anyway, the mc was really well written and I love that the author had her flawed in a good way. Excited to see where this story goes.
I changed my mind I had given it 3 stars before but this is hot garbage as i read more raws. Author keeps making new enemies out of thin air, snatches away MC s things to make it look fair including opportunities and sorts and lots of consistency issues. If anyone has read gate of good fortune they will know what i am talking about
There is hardly anything of significance that happened in the 98 chapters I read. Anything interesting or related to world building happened to other characters and the MC only learns of it when he comes back from hiding somewhere and hears the gossip. Otherwise the MC is grinding experience painfully slowly. Two issues I have: the writer repeats statements over and over again, using slightly different words, or many times the same words. All this does is artificially increases word count without adding to the story. For a story where nothing happens over a large number of chapters it is very frustrating to suffer this bad tactic from writers to increase word count. Second issue: the cost of each chapter vs the enjoyment that you get out of it is totally imbalanced. Why would I spend money when it takes twenty chapters for some minor thing to happen? If you’re going to read this, save your money, and use it only when the story is free. Or wait for the story to have 500 chapters before investing.
Got interested because I'm writing a story in a similar genre and thought to check this out.The story is quite complex and it's clear the author has put a lot of thought into it. grammar is good and most times you know what's happening so you don't get lost.my major irk would be the fact that some parts are basically mirroring events in LoTM. I can understand drawing inspiration since I do same but when events are basically the same, I'd have to say that it's not really good.All in all, good story with potential for greatness however I'd advise author to not overdo it with the inspiration aspect so it doesn't end up being blatant plagiarism.Anyway, that's all for now, bye ✨
Everything in the story which is described by the author is quite good and the main character Arlo 's back story was very sad. And the way he fought with the zombies is very impressive, if you are thinking to read a novel which is about a protagonist in the zombie world this novel will be a good choice.
I'm waiting for read the next chapter. But your publishing was tooooo late. But i really interested to read your novel.Truly a suspense thriller.
It's a nice gaming plot. I can see its potential. Here's 5 stars to motivate the author to write more....
Legit , best story , I've read so far ,...................,............................................... . .... ..................
I wish I could read it again cause damn it has alot of suspense in it ???????????. Author keep up the good work the novel is awesome so far hope you don't make it suck.