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I enjoyed the story, mainly the MC's personality. I love MC's with this kind of persona. I won't say much since it might spoil others and man your writing is so well. I'm confused how this book isn't rated yet ?️??️
When's this gonna continue? Its good that i want more ? ? ?
It is a really good novel,it has it's issues but that's ok. It would be interesting to see if the mc could use more than 1 extra ability when his limiter is removed, maybe be even able to fuse abilities and make insane attacks
Garbage totally garbage everything is nothing but garbage. The MC just keep on making stupid choices. Garbage i tell you. To Summarize it's Garbage.
While the idea behind the story is good, it pains me to say that the poor writing quality makes it unenjoyable. There are too many dialogues, but we have no idea about how the character feels, what they were doing, or what's the situation surrounding them. It lacks proper explanation. This work might be more appropriate as a theater script.Also, as I've mentioned in many of my reviews, proper punctuation is important. Thats what makes a sentence can be easily comprehended. If the author makes no visible improvement in the future, I'm afraid I can't go on reading this. Sorry.
Brother your dialogues need massive work. Most of the time the conversation doesn't has any emotions. Also you need a editor asap. This thing is barely readable
This book has a terrible story line. It is just the normal rich billionaire meets struggling model and rescues her from all her enemies. I do not recommend this book to any reasonable person, it is a waste of data.
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Name : Pei QianClass : Main CharacterStrength : 10Perception : 12Endurance : 8Charisma : 100Intelligence : 16Luck : 1000Titles : [Cursed by Luck][Time Traveler] [Universe Traveler][Ultimate Jinx]If you don't understand this status board, then you haven't read the novel, get outta here and read it!!!
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