I do believe his cheat is too broken, I want to see the MC work to get results, their cheats may help them remove limiters on talents but I want to see them work hard for their power. A good first attempt with passion but I feel that it has fallen into the same pit hole you tried to avoid.
Hey author, please stop skipping time. I'm getting stupid just by reading. Plus could you write the tiers or stage of cultivation in a way we can understand Thank love you
Synopsis is kinda similar to the story of Everyone Else is a Returnee wherein the mc is alone on a time-stopped world and he has to train real hard for him to gain a similar footing to those with powers who transmigrated to other worlds
The story literally makes no sense. Everything the MC does also makes no sense. Somehow satellites still work after a massive solar flare strong enough to make the ambient air temperature burning hot. The MC has no survival instinct and walks into stuff randomly with no plans or caution. Things work out because he's the MC duh. Somehow other people can also survive in the burning air despite the MC needing magical system given alloy body armor to even go outside. It's a hot mess with no real base building either. Points are given at convenient times whenever MC runs out of them. This batch is honestly a big oof.
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Very very nice story. It's a little bit dramatic but entertaining. I wish there are more fighting episodes. Aiden should also learn martial arts so he can defend himself. It would be nice if the boy lead character is stronger. Thank you.
End of a magic era cultivation-style. Unfortunately compared to Mafa Merlin MC of this novel is a braindead bonobo. His cunning level is -5, instead of laying low a few months for unshakable Foundation he keeps getting into fights with people way above his level and fucks up his cultivation against his own advice... Instead of cultivating he gets into all kinds of trouble just to get back into his clan that exiled him? The novel completely devolves into generic xianxia thrash despite the good setting.
READ: This is an urban school slice of life / comedy story with a system for studying. It is quite good and I recommend giving it a try. Makes me think back to my early high school years... *ahem ahem
That is a lot work for fried chicken. But seriously the beginning makes me craving fried chicken lol.Anyway, I like it. This feels like a light-hearted story but eventually became a serious (business story?) one. I give solid 5* and a bucket of fried chicken to the author