Awful, it pretty much can serve as an example of what not to do when writing.Instead of the protagonist exploring the new world and its possibilities, we get pages full of rambling. That's like sitting in front of a bunch of Lego and rambling on about what you could build instead of actually building something.I absolutely love system novels but... we have a supposed nerd as protagonist that doesn't get annoyed as fuck from having to confirm pick up for every single item? This could have been used to portrait him as more human, with him ranting and raving about it, trying to argue etc with the system. Could have been a page filler and running gag, with him arguing with the system in the midst of conversations etc. Could have been used in so many ways..
THAT NOVEL IS 100000000000000000000000 TIMES BETTER THAN THIS
439-440 the chapter is wrong it suddenly jumped mc is on a secret realm then suddenly at 440 he is at some other place with his pet
super good story love each chapter. The character is great and the power system that you made is great and easy to understand.
Please next update as soon as possible, i waiting the next chapter.............................................................................................
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Does anyone know the raw name? If you know just share please ?.
Love it, great idea. Takes the classic isekai trope and gives it a fresh/unique spin with 1 question that every reader has thought of at least once:“What if I could go back and forth between the 2 worlds?”Keep the chapters coming. This story needs/deserves a proper story arcs and an ending/epilogue.
so far, this actually pretty good as expected for Elyon, I can't wait to see the story goes (here goes my coins and fast pass)
wow ? fantastic ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
this novel is super good i read every chapter as soon as it comes out i love this novel so much its unhealthy if your looking for a novel with a good story and good carecters this is the one for you
This book is pure gold. Two Teachers, two students, and two systems. Author you are a amazing writer. Keep it up. I wish you good luck my friend.