Terror Infinity is a great novel, it has excellent Story, Character and World building. This doesn't, but it's not too far off.Simple as that.
It’s a solid story and definitely an entertaining read, I think one of my favorite parts of the story is mainly the plot. I love the world characters, definitely worth reading.
Super interesting!!! I like the style of Yan Yan.
High quality story from the first couple hundred chapters
Yay me and the writer have similar names and profile .love it. Can there be more updates. How old are you anyway?And even if it’s confusing it’s nice. I love this story and it’s awesome writer!!!
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
your synopsis is so real and true, your character design is beautiful, i love your plot already, wonderful story development, keep up the good work, great job!
*inhale* This book is good, especially with people who likes faster books. (maybe a little too fast? The Mc is theown at you right away, I guess for conveinence. I understand that you will develop the character, through the book. Try showing not just telling us who bshe is.) If you care a lot about story and and mysteries, go ahead, you'll love this book.It is a really good book, and for a person who doesn't really like this genre of books, I'm adding it to my library easily.
It feels like I am reading a diary from the author's experience and it's quite relaxing to be honest because this might be one of the few novels that you won't be stressed out for. Just my opinion. ^_^Feels like I am invading someone's privacy just reading this novel xDKeep writing and let me read more! ^_^
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Grammar is awful. Just awful. There’s also some unrealistic scenes like bidding for an item from an arcade machine, but I guess getting a system is unrealistic as well so that’s ignorable.??u200d♂️. There’s some face slapping too and some of the characters have no depth. For example, the bullies at school that harass and then a stubborn girl who won’t “bow” down but will later fall in love with the MC. The teacher which is also his first crush is ignored for nearly 20 chapters. I don’t know why, but I just don’t like this much. If the author fixed the grammar and story then it’d be 4 stars.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.