Honestly, This story is a Diamond in the rough. Would be worth 5 stars across the bar... I wanted to give it a worse score but even being fed up with this story I cannot claim it is worse, for it is well written. But poorly executed.If not for the "system".Do you like reading about MC's, who are essentially puppets? Systems that give quests that are essentially, do this, or be ruined. Where you will be rewarded for doing a good deed. But if you attempt to do a good deed and fail you are punished severely? THEN THIS STORY IS FOR YOU!I honestly liked this novel, with the exception of the long drawn out background details.But the system and its ANNOYING quests killed it. Literally, Everyone comments in every chapter with system quests how B.S. it is. But, this is the author's formula, and they are apparently sticking with it. Welp. I am out.DROPPED this garbage fire.If you do not agree with my ranting, or do not care if the story and direction are completely 1 dimensional. Like playing an old-school game where you only ever could make one choice and all the other "options" were just there to give appearances. Then go for it. I'm sure you'll love it.
Chronos : Greetings...
"Shhh…I'm listening to our baby's movement." He hushed her.
He jumped up and rubbed his now bruised forehead and glared at the old witch.
"Wai.... wai... wait! She was the person you called in my phone? You really are great and thank you." Akira interrupted and asked Sera grinning.
43 (2002/07/31)
Shameless self-review.I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE. The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.
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This book talks about a young boy named Luka Doncic who dribbles his way into destiny. From the sun kissed courts of Ljubljana to the electric arenas of the NBA, Luka's journey is a symphony of talent, resilience and passion.
This book isn’t that interesting to me. Good writing but it’s bland plot. I mean lets be honest everything in this book is generic. He changed the names of mana to ora, but idk it reminded me of the demonic something. same book same style going on but that’s completed and free. I am not saying this book is bad just not unique. (Ps I read till chapter 30, so basically half the book.
I can't get enough of this story. I think this might win for my favorite story of the year, unless it ties with one other story, as the rest so far are not as much fun, fulfilling or fascinating as this one is. It feels fresher for the way it's put together. I'm moved through wide range of feelings. I would love to see drawings from this story because the ones that come to mind are breathtaking from what I've read so far. My only wish is that I could read this in its original language; something is always lost in translation. I look forward to reading this. I wish you, Sanseiu, much success in this story.
It is so good who ever made this is a pro at this the mc is neither overpowered or. Weak its perfect and the plot is well detailed it is very awesome