I like the concept and the way that you don't make him overpowered but you give him an edge also the diversity you put between players with the perks and the freeness of the game is just awesome
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong???
so till vol 1 i find this novel enjoyable.it is a bit light hearted novel with enjoyable wholesome moments.mc got a nice family and is a prodigy although he likes to take nap too often.update rate is also constant.so all in all a very good novel.
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This gets five stars from me for a number of simple reasons:- The writing is on point here. Transitions are smooth and nothing is rushed- Doesn't rush too much despite being a short story. The writing allows the build up as to what would happen next- Got some good showing and imagery going on. - This is a finished and completed work.
Where is the old version of this Novel T_TI would pay for a soft copy of it. ( pleaseeeeeeeee! ) (>_<)'`It's been a long time since i saw this novel, t'was in RR when i first read it.
Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!"Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars."Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call thisconfidence!"Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel."Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*."Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk"Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward."Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try."Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind."Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?"Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*."So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(:Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.
A well written story, care for the details, and overall a decent plot. The writing has been great so far. Hope that the author doesn't decrease the quality of story in the future.
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Interesting novel... Just curious if each world will have different realms and different cultivations as we already saw Magical & Physical cultivation... I feel it will be a lot and conjested... Just hope author adds 2-3 other methods & some can be repetion but with him going to a new world already a bit stronger... That would show progress instead of re-training for 30 worlds...
Well no word from author for about 5 months. It truly is a great story. I would definitely recommend it but the author seems to have either given up or forgotten about it. Definitely sad to see this one go.
Love this book so far! Great character development so far! Intrigued to see where the story will go from here. Can easily see a series developing with different characters. Ready for the entire book 1 to be finished.