Guilty_Yuns
where are the other chps ??? can you guiz tell me ?? .............
Very good for the moment but theia os annoying man I préfèr the mc when he is Aline but thats soooooooooooo goooooood read this please ''''''''''''
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
The world description and diversity is good along with the grammar and update stability. But that's it.The Mc is a Fanboy. With a Poor taste of weapon.He preferred fighting fist like a brute and head on instead of fighting smart.He doesn't have a good strategic or analytical mind.I mean seriously daggers are one of his best choices because it mix well with his foundation. But no.He preferred fist fights because it's a "Hassle" to learn Assassin like skills.He doesn't like spoiled brats but himself is far worse.He doesn't deserve the extra powers of the system because.Well surprise surprise its a lotto. And with the power of plot armor he mostly get Rare and Epic level items.And he has the Gall to complain how "Useless" they are.What a hypocrite. I suggest you fixing his attitude because it doesn't match where we came from.The People of IRL are practical and efficient. Not to mention ruthless when it comes to politics and analysis. Unless he's truly a teenager that only watch anime for the rest of his life.Sigh...Such good background and grammar Ruined by a spoiled brat of an Mc. Says mc who is bask by the power of plot armor.
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The action scene in the first chapter is so cool! I feel like I'm part of the Dungeon's crowd and cheering for Flynn. He's a good fighter and I'm looking for forthcoming character development!
It's a good novel. Though I feel like its going to be a one shot or something because I doubt the arc after this will be good as the first arc. But still I am looking forward for this book to be picked.
Muchas gracias por traer los capítulos, espero que puedas seguir publicándolos así sean dos capítulos por día. Está ha sido una de las mejores novelas que he leído, tiene algo que te engancha, y a mi criterio no es tan monótona.
All for brother....This is the best original novel I had ever read..even the last wish system is shut in front of this novel...May the darkness bless your novel
I'm not very familiar with games, but your storytelling style makes it so interesting even for me. Good characterization and story build up right there. It's amazing how you put a lot of information for your readers.
