Pretty bad to be honest. The MC's knowledge of this world isn't very clear at all. I mean we know he has a library with all of his memories from the previous world, but it's not clear if that applies to the previous world or not. The library in question is also pretty nonsensical because the man isn't just reading memories you might expect. Dude seems to have a ludicrously large eclectic and convenient reading history to have stored in there.Dude seems to take some ridiculous risks before really knowing much of anything about magic too. Part of that might be the author's inability to keep his knowledge of this world consistent or the way he acts for that matter. This is only by chapter 7 as well. I can only imagine this will get worse the more the story develops because it will be more stuff for the author to try and keep track of.
it's mtl after chapter 40 or else how would they have over 700 chapters out two months after it began releasing worst dip in quality I'ce seen
dropping the translation quality like this after the free trial is just a scam, trying to trick some people into batch unlocking chapters without noticing.
Sporadically released, no fixed schedule at at.. brother, you're killing ppl who loves this novel. If you're busy, just xomment on the latest chapter, make your readers feel close to you. I know, this review feels a little bit personal because for the novel itself, i loved it, even i re read it multiple times. So.. please don't kill our spirit and gype of this novel. And dont leave us alone in the dark, occationally popping up on thr comments would be fine. I doubt it would cost you a few minutes. Thanks udong, whatever difficulties you have on RL, i hope you could overcome it really soon
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the thing that rlly bothers me about this novel is the inconsistency in the story and how everyone and their mothers are so gung-ho about pk-ing that its just a major turn off from the story. Like how you would skip the parts about the mc dungeoning and the spend 4-7 chapters about him getting pk-ed or mc pk-ing. the plot inconsistency is rlly bugging me out, like how you plotted out the story beforehand and then when u go to write it its nothing like the story you plotted out already, and more of just sitting down and improvising the whole thing. there was something i was rlly looking forward to later in the novel but all of a sudden getting that event pulled out from under my nose made me deduct major points from this novel. and idk about anyone else but when i read a novel about a game i like seeing the numbers, equip stats, player stats, dmg numbers and stuff like that. but having it all suddenly disappear for like 70 chapters only to have it reappear for like 2-3 chapters rlly grinds my gears(200 something chapters as of this review) most annying part is when u read the story it skips around and back like u forgot to mention something and just decided that all of a sudden it becomes canon. u cant be like "wow he just soloed a boss thats higher level than him" to all of a sudden "o hes not strong enough to take this boss on yet" inconsistency is the key if that was fixed id totally be onboard to continue reading but for now its a no for me.(** if this doesnt count as contructive criticism and gets deleted will be posting it multiple times till it doesnt)
such a great start but after chap 40 the nationalism and racism start to grow ends up with china being the best and everyone else is pretty much second tier citizen's
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This story is a breath of fresh air, the MC isn't a wimp when it comes to "jade beauties" treats his enemies seriously, doesn't mess around and "accidently" let his enemies escape, etc. He also has a system which will let him evolve the world he is in to a high level one. It's super interesting and definitely a unique experience. If you have coins, I highly suggest spending them to unlock at least one chapter so that the story may get picked. You will not regret picking this story up.
In this review I want to say that I love that all the girls MC virgins, and not as in most novel that they fu**ed someone, and the author tries to show what a cruel world, or what he loves experienced, or he felt sorry for them, in a word, it does not explain, also MC is not stupid, does not let the enemies to gain strength until the end novely attacked him, there is a lot that I can say, but if you will be reading you understand me.Well anyways the AUTHOR of your novel one of the BEST to webnovel want to thank you for the excellent work ?, I also want to clarify a grammar chapters in the beginning and the end at the moment, I read 95 chapters and I can say that the author improves his grammar and creativity with writing, will also add *in novel too not much of mistakes there, all readable*. At the end of the review I want to recommend this novel for reading to all readers who will see this review?
Main problem is a lot of characters are added in within a few chaps and it’s hard to keep track of them. . .
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