Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel.The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration.I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days.Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
It’s absolutely awesome. If ur into awesome fights and nice story ur going to love this one. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
J'en suis au début de l'histoire et ça m'énerve, je suis désolée, mais c'est mon avis, le mc est un imbécile qui ne connait rien a rien il a été blessé et a eu une paraplégie... Mais ce qui est super chiant c'est que t'as une autre meuf qui quand il commence le jeu qui lui fait pas son évaluation de caractère et après t'en a une autre qui le trouve arrogant alors qu'il parle juste normalement, ça c'est encore super énervant... Et cette même meuf le sous estime et dit qu'il triche ça m'a vraiment soulé. Je dis ça mais je suis juste au premier chapitre peut être que vous vous allez accroché mais moi j'arrêterai ce roman il me met surtout de mauvaise humeur... Bravo a l'auteur quand même d'écrire une histoire.
The story is very interesting .I wish you could upload more chapters with good content to read .It is very good to read .
Everything was going good till ahhh people came in and they talk on the very first day as if they all have full knowledge about the apocalypse.... children being like mommy will I grow up and become like that and those dumb dialogue ... Repeated sentences..... RUINED
don't overcomplicate sentences, make it simple if you can. i want to read novel, not study journal. it's uncomfortable to read. i just skim through the chapter. 10 chaps is all i can do. the first few chapters are good, it gone downhill after mc transmigration(?) to the past, i don't know why, i just lost the will to read the rest, it's just felt uncomfortable to read.it has good potential. my advice is, let your friend read it first before posting it in WN
I love this novel it's sad that it does not update that much enymore but the MC is funny and there a much misunderstandings where the Mc comes in funny situations but the developmand of the story makes sense for me.♡Sorry if there are eny mistakes english is not my mother tongue : P
Writing Quality: 3 *** - This is due to the author not giving a proper development for every thing that happens within the story. Things just happen out of nowhere in things such as the MC's love interest. The good thing is there are not too many mistakes in the author's spelling or grammar. The issue only lies within the author's delivery. Stability of Updates: 5 ***** -At the time of writing, I have not yet arrived at the latest chapter. But a short scroll through the table of contents allows me to conclude that the author is very diligent in releasing chapters daily. The author has achieved a minimum of 1 chapter per day and a maximum of 5 chapters per day on this web novel. Although this is great, I would suggest that the author should only try maintain it at 1 or 2 chapter per day so that more time can be put into improving the quality and to avoid health issues. Story Development: 3 *** - It is an interesting novel, the only issue is that the development is not consistent and is too rushed. Most of the problems surrounding the development of the story can be attributed to the character design, mainly the MC and those close to him.Character Design: 2 ** CONTAINS SPOILER FOR 3 DIFFERENT CHAPTERS - This is the area that bugs me the most with this novel. Characters do not match their 'mold'. For example, the father is an esteemed general and yet he allows his son, who he knows to be a person who does not focus on cultivation and only knows how to harasses women, to lead an army. Sure, the father saw his son fight others in one of the chapters, but someone of his ranking should have the brains to doubt his son and not be confident in him blindly unless he doesn't care about the lives of his men. Better yet, why would an esteemed general let his son, who he does not know the full capabilities of, to go ahead and assassinate the opposing army's leader? From what he understands of his son, he should be doubting the mental health of his son for proposing such a plan or be worried for the success of the mission or safety of his son. Anyway, what I would like to say is that each of the characters should have a proper foundation that can justify their decisions and actions. Whatever they do, should make sense from what was said in previous chapters or descriptions. The chapter that annoyed me the most was when the MC got together with his love interest. Whatever the MC told the love interest did not match with what happened in previous chapters. I started to doubt whether the MC was just coaxing her or it was just simply bad development.The author has a nice naming sense though. Just need to put more effort in building stable foundations for the characters and make them stay in character unless they are forced by the circumstances.World Background: 3 *** -Barely any information is given about the world but there is no issue with that. Your typical cultivation world, just with a different naming for the cultivation levels.All in all, this is a decent novel to read to pass time when you're bored. I do not suggest this to people who are picky about quality of the story itself. The author is improving and I think that his/her next story would be an interesting read if he/she comes up with a good plot. Read this novel if you wish to witness the authors' rise.To the author: Good job and keep it up. If you find my review bad or mean in anyway, I am not sorry. :) If writing is your passion, I hope it helps. Though I think there are more I want to say(both positive and negative), it's already late and I can't remember them.
You're typical web-novel. No defining moments, no defining characters, no intriguing plot. Straightforward, make random enemies, get strong, kill people and get bitches. Just read if you're bored and want to waste time.
With an 8.8 rating for the untranslated version, this should have won out of the 8 options we had weeks ago. I think people aren't giving it a chance because it's last in the list and the cover isn't as swaggy as others. Looking forward to it.
I have no expectations from Mad Snail after TDG. wellgl bois, get ready 2 get ur hopes sht on. .... How's everyone's day going. Ya'll good? Great me 2....
This was one of the best novels I have ever read. It is really detailed and with great backstory. The enemy and protagonist design is lovely. Definitely 100% recommend