Almost at an important milestone that could really help your novel, which is reaching 500 chapters! I am loving the book so far. Though the chapter release is kind of abysmal and probably holds back the back from more good tickets. I think this novel has great potential and that you should not give up. I will continue to support this novel. Very excited for the upcoming chapters
An interesting and underutilized mechanism to which to harness the protagonist’s development. The progression seems too quick, but the psychological warfare keeps the reader’s attention.
Because he want to reive his parents, he become a monster-tamer ...Well, how i start with this ? Even the start of the story is absurt, illogical, childish, and boring in the same time. No need to even think about reading it and find something good. You know right for the start it wil be one of the many, many copy-past-use-plot-rope and face-slape with no-reason watsower of type of boock.In other words, pass you way, this is not only full bags of b*lshit but also complet wast of time.
even tho it has the most negative views.... .people read this more than anything in this trial release ..... ?.it has 260k views & around 20 comments ?.I hope webnovel can be wise & don't just choose it .. sigh
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Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite. If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing. Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!
Really entertaining tbh. Grammar is meh at best, though I’ve seen much worse. At 100 chaps and might to read it to the end. Update speed is insane, which excuses the grammar to a degree too. Give it a try!
Please, authors, post updates more often.It's all wonderful.The characters are very real and you can relate to them. And also the plot and system is very inventive.
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Interesting
Can’t wait for the next update!!! Best book I’ve read so far