PudgeyTheBird
While taking the shower, he looked at the scar on his chest which was just above his heart and touched it while he got lost in his thoughts.
"ROGET THAT,CAPTAIN!"
Bishou: Say, do you miss the place where you're from?
-Water Enchant 1/1
Chang Xiuying sighed and jumped out of the window.
This girl said 「What? 」 with a very suspicious expression on her face. I felt wronged as I turned my eyes away.
"invisible breath!!"
I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.oh...140 I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
First thing first I love this book so far. Unless I missed some there have been no grammatical errors, while there are some strange events the story development is fluid and well put together and so is the character development there hasn't been too much yet as there only 4 chapters done at the time of this review. Because of how little there chapters are at the moment I can't say anything about the update stability. In terms of the world back ground I don't know much about it because the story hasn't progressed far enough, but after 20 or so chapters I'll come back and update this review. All in all I hope you guys try out this book and have a wonderful reading experience.
Very cool
The story is great - aside from the pure amount of content and the frequency of updates, there is the amazing world-building - the magic system, stats and the quests.The idea to make the MC always be accompanied by someone is a really smart idea especially when it comes to the comedic aspects of a story.I like the speed at which the story progresses, the MC gets new spells and increases their stats quickly, but that is to be expected at low levels.My only suggestion is that the combat scenes tend to be pretty short - I understand this may not be a combat-centric series but I think they dealt with the boar a bit too quickly for example.Overall great series with an interesting setting that is rewarding to read thanks to the character progression.
Translation quality is over the top. Plot is astonishingly Godlike. Only failure: Inconsistent updates. Hence the 4?s from me. Great job none the less.
