Name: Fellow Doaist Chen, Can You Get Further Away From Me 陈道友，请你离我远一点行不行Author: Daddy Almighty 爸爸无敌 Lv.5Chapters: 211chapters(480k words)Status: Ongoing
This is your author, Yanglin of Mountain Reliance King.As I am writing a shameless review for myself, of course, I would have to mark myself full score to compensate for my fragile heart of effort put into the book so far. With forty-three chapters so far, I believe that my slow but steady effort should have created a proper background for this book to continue without feeling too rushed and rigid to the point it missing the slice of life that supposed to be included.The novel Lan Xian Di, aka Supreme Emperor of Mist, touched on the story of Qin Lan as he followed his own belief to walk the path of cultivation once more as he unlocks the memories about his first, second, and third reincarnations.It won't be a rushed story for sure, as I'm intended to make this more of a slice of life novel. As I am still inexperienced right now, the story might seem lacking in picturing many aspects of the story. But I'll put effort as it goes to make this novel better in each chapter.Another part to take note of is due to my OCD health issue, this author of yours will always have difficulty completing a chapter properly. Often, it's because my idea and writing don't match one another in the expected 1500 words and above. It is also my biggest trouble so far as once in a while, producing a chapter end up as a hurdle to me for days and weeks.But I'll try my best to continue. Webnovel did offer me a contract early when we're at around fifteen chapters, but I hesitated as I'm worried that I couldn't perform as required. Of course, signing one would be great because it means my book will be valued greatly.I'll end this review here as today is counted as one of the best days for me so far. Do expect a chapter update soon. Wish me better, and stay safe, everyone. I hope you'll continue to support me as I try my best to complete this work.Thank you.Mountain Reliance King, Yanglin
Another cliched cultivation flick without anything unique .
With the vivid description that's combined with the world premise established in the prologue, you can't help but anticipate and wonder how the story will branch towards said Prologue from the first chapter. And so far, it does not disappoint!
Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.
at this point I don't have the courage to start any new novels in here, knowing that webnovel can and probably will just stop translating them without even giving the reason why, the least you could do is release the privilege chapters if you stopped translating it anyway
I dropped this novel before and i was bored and found it again and decided to give it another try but I just couldn’t...First of all you meet someone and ask the person to join without explaining to detail what you want him to do and he just agrees and then you go ahead and give everything to him for free and he asks no questions whatsoever and just went ahead with it...Secondly you meet a girl who is older than you and she gave you her number and hit on you , ok I understand the fact that because it’s your first time you would want to go on a date with her but to ask her to marry you on your first date when you are only 17 WTF who does that and there are far more beautiful girls out there and also you no nothing about this girl...This novel just seems like it’s the authors wet dream and how he wants his life to be so he just write everything down without thinking that it wouldn’t be him reading the novel and also you put the restricted pa but all i see is a na*ve kind hearted boy who is an id*ot....
While the power he has through his game seems good, it is destroyed by this novel. This novel is basically DBZ. Almost the entire novel at this point is spent on one fight. It was almost 20 chapters! It should've been just one! Very disappointing. This novel isn't even about the power to raise actresses. It's about a fight with an arrogant young master.
Really great book....Exceeded my expections....m expecting more becos am still yet to finish the chapters released......and I love the plot....everything including the characters were perfect....nice novel...
One of the best books I've read. It needs more reader's. It creates a world in which I'm always watching out for the next chapter. So if your reading this, stop and read the book.
➽ This is the first book that I am reading! This is a great book! The story is interesting and he gives deep information on characterization. Makes better for imagination.
Really interesting premise, so far the character progression of the MC has been great and the author hasn’t fallen into the pitfall of making him OP instantly so it’s nice to see gradual gains in strengths and a change in mindset.