Aseer89
Hello guys ,check out my newest novel "The Donghon Sect" ,if you like it don't forget to gave a nice comment.seeya
This might be a slightly biased review, but after hearing about this novel almost everyday for a while now, I finally read it. It's quite good! better than what I expected, and I am starting to be eager to read more of it. Before reading this work I thought it might not be my exact cup of tea, but here we are, I enjoyed it. I'm happy to support a friend, and if anyone else feels like it, I encourage doing the same. This novel deserves a chance. And it's my truest feeling if I say I am still hoping to get a physical copy one day, a signed physical copy!
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Author is being a Troll with its rating, Undeserved.>>>...........................................................................................
Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
Just reading the it make me happy that I have read it like three times already so please update more because it a really great novel and I would like to read more
It’s been fun reading so far looking forward to more updates ❤️ character development have smooth and nice ?? world description have been good and some comedy in between is lovely it developed my interest in reading it further
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc.If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps). Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.
I love this story so much...It is quite outstanding however the fact that when i got to the best part,I have to pay made my currently broke self sad...like none of my fav stories are free however it is understandable considering how good this story is...
I wonder how Fer Desz comes up with such twist
Just finished catching up on reading Reverend Insanity a few days ago, this was a good pick me up. for me this is a 10/10 read so far. The author usually uploads something everyday, which is surprising given the quality of the writing. if anything this is good because it stays close to the pacing and general feeling of the source text. the power scaling seems decent so far and the OG characters seem to act like they would have in the original story, especially Fang Yuan. The author did a really good job recreating the writing style of RI, or at least I get that feeling I get when reading RI. 10/10 keep up the good work!
