My only wish rn is to become as stylish and cultured man as ryan and Mr.Wave .. but im introvert that's why I'm here haha
I usually don’t even review.. so takes mine as gospel
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This story has right now over 3,9k chapters in the raw and is still not finished, I sincerely doubt that this will get translated in a timely manner, can the translator tell us how he will achieve this? Chapter per week maybe? Thanks
For me, no matter how genius a child is it wouldn't change the fact that he is still a child and that there would be times that a genius would express himself in a way a child does. However our ML doesn't, it would probably be more convincing if he was a reincarnated person than just simply a genius.
Next would be the reactions of other villages/chiefs, normally they would be alarmed seeing a developing place as it may turn out to be a threat to their own territories. Also it's a bit unnerving seeing(well reading) adults not having any complaints about a 7 year old child(even if we say he is a genius) butting in / doing a deal with them.
Well, I'm not all knowing or a great writer but that's just what I noticed that seems to be a bit out of place. But other than that it shows a very unique flow and not using much of the norms in such genre. And I cant really make such impression on the story so ill be taking more chapters before reviewing again.
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I've been reading the raws and me got curious about english version. The novel is my top 3 novel all time.
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it's interesting at start. but as i keep reading the Author didn't give lot if information. you just have to figure it out and you'll understand later chapter by using your common sense and the MC is a reincarnated or transmigrator or like but the author lack of giving explanation or information. and the MC is stupid as **** he doesn't like to study he lack knowledge. and the Author just saying the MC could identify easily the beasts but never pointed out if he is just the who can do it. and the the biggest problem here the MC is JUDGE MENTAL.
sorry for my grammar. as long as you understand.
just binge read the whole thing. I love it and am very excited to read more. the story is smart and entertaining. the characters are well developed and fun to listen to. the story has good pacing from moment to moment, nothing jarring or disconnected. besides a couple grammar or sentence structure problems it's very well written. the world's creation is developed steadily throughout the chapters and I'm excited to learn more about the world in the future. the info dumps are minor and quick to read through which I really appreciate, they provide useful information in the moment and don't bog down the story with long history. I've enjoyed where the story is going so far and am looking forward to where it goes in the future! keep up the amazing work author! I will keep an eye out for new chapters.
Initial Impressions~
The novel starts off with a short flashback in the form of a dream where he was once a professional "CSGO" player in the finals of a major competition. The noteworthy point of the flashback is the "black-mask" he wears during the competition with his identity hidden from others similar to the actions of a professional Hearthstone player/streamer named "DisguiseToast". The "black-mask" can be seen from the cover art of the novel. The world is made to be as realistic as possible although not sure if that is going to change in the later chapters.
The main character is equipped with a higher level of gaming skills (maybe overpowered) where he acquired but have to quit from a game in the past due to some reason. I do get a "King's Avatar" Vibe from this starting point. However, the MC personality wise is more of a lesser-jerk who have a sister-complex and may potentially be interested in little girls. Basically, his relationship with his younger stepsister turn sour when he mistreated her early on so he tries to mend the relationship in an invasive manner. The author probably wrote a flawed MC so that he can be corrected in future development and the MC is not all that terrible in attitude to make you despise him. The character development in the novel is well done because we can fully imagine how the appearance of the MC looks like and his traits. Moreover, the side characters does have a brief colorful description of themselves so their interactions with the MC will be more realistic. The author really focuses his attention on the character development.
The author would throw-in frequent Japanese terms/culture in the story such as loli, anime and oni-chan as well as plenty of swearing in the MC's monologue. The novel do not use the "stuck in virtual game" or the "I have a problem so I need the game to earn money solo" trope so there would be a heavy mix of real lifestyle and gaming on PC with other real players commenting from the sidelines instead. The novel is highly immersive in the world of "PUBG" and it is advisable you know the game mechanics beforehand like the type of guns and landing phase to fully enjoy the action. The author have written in the way that stay true to how a "PUBG" match is played and the novel would likely be the 'truest' gaming novel here in QIDIAN. Translators does have a good reputation of providing high quality reads while conveying the wordplay/quotes/references the author utilize.
Overall, I recommend you give the novel a try unless you dislike novels that focus on one match for too long or the slower story development due to heavy emphasis on the character.
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The usual shameless review from the author :))))))))))))
Welcome to my novel! I have prepared a lot for this novel here. I believe I kept working on it for four months already.
I just had a few ideas to upgrade a game, League of legends if you know it, and decided to write a novel and implement these ideas there.
Here you will find an interesting story about a young gamer who was pro and turned down by his team, going to the states and starting over at a new game. A cliché it might seem indeed, and I can't say anything against this.
But I didn't focus entirely over making it all original to be frank. The setting might be cliché but it's suitable for the novel I'm writing, and I love this setting so much so it's cool for me.
The things I wanted to introduce here are just few upgrades at the hardware of games, the way of playing the game, and how it can evolve to match the upcoming technology in the near future... All under a good novel that anyone can enjoy reading for sure.
It's not a VR game novel, as fully developed massive VR games won't appear in our world this soon anyway. This novel here is just a step that can bring us closer from the upcoming VR world of gaming.
What do you expect here?
1. Good novel in game concept, writing quality, steady and good rate update. The update rate is one to two chaps per day, with chaps over 2k words in general.
2. Good characters, fleshed out to be like any real gamer you might know, perhaps even yourself :D.
3. Good character development.
4. Lots of fun and adventures.
5. A romance is there indeed, a struggle of two lovers to be together is the backbone of this novel.
6. It has harem - Not a big one - but the MC is someone who can't say no to a beauty.
7. The novel is a mix between the real life and gaming life. Even the early 30 chaps will focus over the real life issues and how the mc will handle them. So you can consider it to be a slice of life novel + gaming novel.
8. I can't say the MC is OP. He is just someone with great talent and skill that will make up look OP especially when surrounded with normal and common gamers.
I hope you like my novel, and I'm open for any suggestions. If you see anything wrong, please tell me about it and I'll take your point into my consideration for sure.
Enjoy and have fun :))))))))