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It's very very nice most like novelI will realy love this novelThank for Yahiya nizar. Congratulations ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The story has lots of potential. It started with adrenaline pumping action in chapter 1 and it truly was a great reading experience. I think the choice of 1st POV suits the story well since it's the experience of one person. However, I also think that there is too much introspection (chap2) that some elements already become repetitive. It's also become slowpaced since he had not met anyone yet and still alone for two chapters. Maybe I'm just impatient or I have become one since Chapter1 was quite full of action so the expectation was there. In chapter3 he already met another character and some questions were answered, but only after paragraphs of introspection again. Just a concerned reminder from one author to the next, be careful not to go to the purple prose territory. Also try to eliminate redundancy. All the best author! Keep on writing!
Nope, leaving 1 star so people aren't mislead into actually trying to read this. Grammar is really bad...
Very good novel so far (chapter 111)
The story is about a transmigrator that has a system that allow him to improve his cultivation by doing nothing as long as he has a technique.
So don't expect the classical rush into secret realm, tournament arc and do on.
Here we have a low key MC that try to improve but don't want to attract troubles.
I'm hoping you could release three chapters or more daily for the novel. I binge read everything and waiting for the next chapters is very depressing to me. Can't you just post the entire novel on the platform.
A very good mix of dark and cute/fluffiness which gives you all the things you want. There is a little bit of everything and the characters are relatable. Overall a great read and I can't wait to see more as there is so much to learn about the world.
The quality of the descriptions is amazing. The story telling is great and it keeps you looking forward to what's next. After looking over the fact that the chapters are longer than normal, its amazing read. So as long as you don't mind long chapters, this is a great read
While the relationship between him and his sister/cousin is sweet, almost everyone else emotionally abuses him. Be advised. I stopped reading once his aunt took advantage of him after a massage. In any event, the synopsis needs to be updated and more tags added.
giving 1 star is going favor cause can't do any lower, from 1st chapter it is paid, worst , ?
After 50+ chapters (yes..raws) I've read enough to classify this one into the "white rice" category. It may kill your reading hunger, but it's so darn bland... The MCs cheat can help him find treasures, identify pet potential and evolve his beasts towards a special path, but the writer makes sure he can't completely abuse it.For example, treasures in the wild are usually protected by strong beasts, in the city, most of them have been identified before, so he can only find a few opportunities. If the beast is stronger than the master, it can revolt and cancel the contract, etc. Overall, you get a more mature P0kemon with a MC that will always be above his peers, but not ridiculously so. It's a middle of the pack story...no huge flaws, but also nothing to grab your attention.