NahIdwin89
Really hard to read because of the grammar mistakes. I can understand it, but there are too many mistakes.
I feel like so far (as of Chapter 90) the pacing is both too fast and too slow. It seems like the MC has barely done anything but also rushes to whatever happens next. Theres barely any down time for the MC to actually train since it seems like every 3 days he is forced to move to a different location. It's definitely a good read but the pacing just keeps throwing me off, especially with chapters that make it seem like there was some sort of progression between the chapters which can make it confusing at times.
Bro its one of the best underrated novels with extra good world building and characters. What more do you want.
A hilarious and enjoyable read. I would recommend you to give it a shot if your interested.
I think it’s a saying in Their language not literally giving “sons” it’s more of giving the protagonist more troubles…thats what I think.. hehhe
I forget how many times I reread this lmao
This book is great, one of the best I've read. hope it continues to get better.
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Pretty good. Question: How powerful do you intend to make him?
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I like how this story has started. Although the author mentioned that the first chapters are being edited, I would like to say that it has potential. I also appreciate his vocabulary ('cause I have poor vocabulary hahaha), and the character development? Great job and keep writing!??
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This is basicaly a brainwashing harem novel. Whoever the MC binds with feels a sense of familiarity with him and the system also foces him to interact with them.
