Return Of The Betrayed Primordial Mage

OP garbage MC with system who doesn't want to mess with timeline or story line........................

can barley understand the first chapter what even is with the random letters that honestly make no sense??? the story and characters seem good but it is hard to tell because of the slightly poor writing quality. other than that as far as I can tell it is pretty good. keep writing and maybe do some very slight revisions and it would be a great work.

this story has nothing to do with his reading skills, learning capabilities or his smarts. it a wish fulfillment, slice of life, semi-smut like all others of it's kind.

The idea behind this story is definitely a unique one that I haven't come across before and makes for a fairly fun read. There are some grammatical mistakes that need fixing, but the author has mentioned they will work on it later which is good to know. The characters have pretty interesting dialogue and there are also some surprising twists in the story. Overall, this work is one worth checking out! Keep up the good work author!!

While the relationship between him and his sister/cousin is sweet, almost everyone else emotionally abuses him. Be advised. I stopped reading once his aunt took advantage of him after a massage. In any event, the synopsis needs to be updated and more tags added.

"Did you see how many I killed? At least twenty. If you can just kill this one then you can be like me." She said switching from the stick to the carrot, coaxing Sasha into it. "C'mon Sasha, what if you need to protect Liz?"