Look pretty interesting, the story is what it say in the synopsis so i hope that the mindless ntr hater don't start bothering the story and author.Anyway here is my support, good luck and don't give up!
I frankly love this story. There is not a lot of like this around and I love sci fi. I hope this story continues to at least 50 chapters so that people catch this story.
The idea behind the book was good enough, had the potential to be great even but the execution was disappointing. At first I tried to bear with it but couldn't after a while. For one the plot holes were annoying and this is coming from someone who usually doesn't mind plot holes much.There was also a lot of unnecessary commentary which is common in other novels of the same genre so it would have been somewhat forgivable if not for the fact that the unnecessary commentary was also unnecessarily long. What should have been fleshed put wasn't and what didn't need to be was.As for the characters themselves, I won't say they were terrible but some of their actions or reactions to certain events really felt unnantural and/or forced. Like they were doing something, or only existed in the first place because there was supposed to be some such character or some such event.I'm neither an author nor a sophisticated reader but I do understand the trials in trying to write a book which is why I don't usually write reviews, I usually just rate it and leave it at that and even then only if I feel it was good because if it wasn't I'd just not rate it or review it. Writing is hard work, even if you're particularly talented you still have to put the time and effort in to make any decent sort of work. The only reason I'm writing this review now is that I feel that this had the potential to be so much better. I've read similar books which I loved and this reminded me a little of them, not in the plagiarism sense but in the vibe it gave. With a good editor and less overdone tropes it could have been a gem that's all.
I like the theme of the story, eventhought it copy many other novel l still like it.The quality of the writing was not good so it was a little minus but overall good enought for me
I really like this story I had read it before but the quality wasn't as good as this one. It was understandable and there were some words that I couldn't understand but it was fine it didn't bother me.
there are around 5 consecutive chapters that haven't been updated from a preview which breaks the story up, recently there has been released chapters that only have half of the chapter the remain half is from previous chapters. The story is interesting and has a good balance to progress and world building, unfortunately the previous mentioned problems have let this novel down.
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Great novel, I can’t get enough of it. The one thing that bothers me though is that there is just not enough chapters to satisfy me.
You improved alot since I started reading btw (chapter 5 I think I only remember it still hadn't finished the Divine pill sect part) great improvement and i like the fact that you listen to the community on discord. Congrats on this novel and on being better then demi hahaha.Keep up the good work.
Alright guys, as a shameless author I will support my work and rate it 5 star... without wasting any time let me just give the pros and cons according to what I feel.Pros:1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength. cons: 1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting readAlright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...
Im giving this three stars because i wish the author would lengethen the novel instead of this because half the novel is just the mc warming up to the idea of banging his mom we only get lemons at the final volume i wish they expanded it i hope you can author
I like Dan already! The first chapter immediately captivated me and I immediately added this book to my library. I’m excited to see who the girl was?❤️ read it guys. Really